Old Man Moon

he is sage
wise, wily and sound
not omnipotent but almost
through the ages he has influenced the tides
he is ready for a break
with no relief in sight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Wolf Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 7:14 PM
Guess even the moon might be replaced a 'bot' one day: "Break-Shmeak!"
Krutsinger Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 2:55 PM
I hope not don't you?
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 11:31 AM
Hello Caren, this is his life time jpb tored or not.Hugs.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 11:13 AM
Hello Caren, yes he does very well. Hugs.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 3, 2021 at 11:09 AM
He does well
Hankins Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 8:28 AM
Yep, it's an arduous task, but someone has to do it.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 9:53 AM
I am glad it is not me
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