Old Man Blues

The Old Man has never
walked on the Moon
but he has crapped his pants
and he has puked on his wife's shoes
but after drinking a bottle of whiskey
The Old Man killed it when he played the blues.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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December 31, 2023 at 11:11 AM
Very graphic poem Lenny... expressed so well..
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December 31, 2023 at 6:06 PM
I truly appreciate your words my poetic friend.
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