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OLD MAN AND THE RIVER

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ fisherman's line still while the river rushes past~ tug comes unbidden
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George Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 1:23 AM
Beautiful haiku with metaphoric image.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 6:24 AM
thank you, dear Valsa :-)
Dietrich Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 1:02 AM
Great ku, Sara.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 6:23 AM
many thanks, Andrea
Gauthier Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 8:50 PM
Love how you captured serenity in this lovely haiku, Sara ~
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 6:23 AM
thank you, dear Line.
Wolf Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 7:41 PM
Hemingway wants to 'sea' this one. :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 6:23 AM
touche, Gershon! thanks for visiting; appreciate you and your comments.
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