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Old Man

How are you old man? Need a hand? Crossing the street? I bet one day you were a lot like me Young and carefree Young man this is true I was young and a fool, just like you I may need a hand across the street But my mind is working, wisdom's missing in youth So the young man so full of brim Led the old man to the other side Smug and taunting, at the old mans cane Thinking I am young and invincible, not old and weak On the other side of that busy street The old man smiled, thinking, he used to be me He tipped his hat, and said his thanks The young man laughed, don’t stumble and fall old man As the young man turned to walk away He gasped and held his chest tight As he tumbled head long into the ground Confused as life seemed to leak away The old man rushed to his side Mouth to mouth, breathing life Into the ungrateful little soul He saved his life that eventful day The old man was a doctor long ago The young man survived from this old mans hand Compassion was the champion of that fine day The young man is now a doctor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/1/2014 9:12:00 AM
Simply brilliant story. Says so very much about respect, life and kindness.
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Date: 4/18/2014 9:16:00 AM
That is such a touching story and it really moved me :) Ana
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Date: 4/11/2014 3:17:00 PM
Wow, Arthur, you gave me chills in your last three verses. How clearly you describe the smug young man and the elder gentleman. Time waits for no one and we all need a breath of helpful air from time to time. The young fellow was lucky he had a retired doctor nearby. Truly an amazing story written in verse! Love and blessings, carolyn
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/13/2014 7:21:00 PM
So very kind of you, thank you.
Date: 4/9/2014 5:48:00 PM
Excellent Arthur, you are a great story teller. Third line exchange were for was. I very much enjoyed your tale and was glad the young man survived.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/13/2014 7:30:00 PM
Thanks Richard, I didn't have a receipt for "was" so I had to buy a new "were" but its all done!!! They wouldn't take an exchange. LOL
Date: 4/9/2014 12:46:00 AM
WOW! This is a wonderful story/poem. You never know what an old person can be. I have two poems here ( An Old Man ) and a ( A Wise Man ) Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/13/2014 7:19:00 PM
Thanks Lucilla!!!! Hope you are ok!!!
Date: 4/8/2014 5:23:00 AM
A very good story told in poetic form..Sometimes it seems that energy and strength is wasted on the young but there are some young men who have great qualities..Thanks for the visit to my page..I got a chuckle at your comment..Sara
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/13/2014 7:18:00 PM
thank you so much for dropping by!
Date: 4/7/2014 11:02:00 PM
A moving thought. Enjoyed the poem
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/13/2014 7:14:00 PM
Thank you kindly!!

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