Old Man

How are you old man?
Need a hand? Crossing the street?
I bet one day you were a lot like me
Young and carefree

Young man this is true
I was young and a fool, just like you
I may need a hand across the street
But my mind is working, wisdom's missing in youth

So the young man so full of brim
Led the old man to the other side
Smug and taunting, at the old mans cane
Thinking I am young and invincible, not old and weak

On the other side of that busy street
The old man smiled, thinking, he used to be me
He tipped his hat, and said his thanks
The young man laughed, don’t stumble and fall old man

As the young man turned to walk away
He gasped and held his chest tight
As he tumbled head long into the ground
Confused as life seemed to leak away

The old man rushed to his side
Mouth to mouth, breathing life
Into the ungrateful little soul
He saved his life that eventful day

The old man was a doctor long ago
The young man survived from this old mans hand
Compassion was the champion of that fine day
The young man is now a doctor
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 9:12 AM
Simply brilliant story. Says so very much about respect, life and kindness.
Espinola Collins Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 9:16 AM
That is such a touching story and it really moved me :) Ana
Devonshire Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 3:17 PM
Wow, Arthur, you gave me chills in your last three verses. How clearly you describe the smug young man and the elder gentleman. Time waits for no one and we all need a breath of helpful air from time to time. The young fellow was lucky he had a retired doctor nearby. Truly an amazing story written in verse! Love and blessings, carolyn
Vaso Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 7:21 PM
So very kind of you, thank you.
Carrillo Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 12:46 AM
WOW! This is a wonderful story/poem. You never know what an old person can be. I have two poems here ( An Old Man ) and a ( A Wise Man ) Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
Vaso Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 7:19 PM
Thanks Lucilla!!!! Hope you are ok!!!
Kendrick Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 5:23 AM
A very good story told in poetic form..Sometimes it seems that energy and strength is wasted on the young but there are some young men who have great qualities..Thanks for the visit to my page..I got a chuckle at your comment..Sara
Vaso Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 7:18 PM
thank you so much for dropping by!
Sangwai Avatar
April 7, 2014 at 11:02 PM
A moving thought. Enjoyed the poem
Vaso Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 7:14 PM
Thank you kindly!!
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