Old Jalopy Looking Sublime

On pavements of pink hued highway
Ocean smiled in eyes of children
Roadside toads croaked with joy at the
Old Jalopy looking sublime

Pain in both knees and heart pounding
Still purple smile on blooming lips
All vintage cars looked with envy
At the swinging old Jalopy

Thin chin bald head dry skin still strong
How old are you asked the Fiat
Well past hundred said it smiling
All hands waved at old Jalopy


Bouquets and wreaths lifted its mood
It now ran with faster motion
Well ahead of competitors
Suddenly the Jalopy crashed


Gathered people embraced the gold
Fondly they called it's our treasure
Garlanded it with red lilies
Autumn raindrops showered fragrance



July 19, 2019
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Cornish Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 6:58 AM
Probir, warm thoughts/memories and fine art
Gupta Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 12:43 PM
Thank you so much, Craig, for liking the poem and awarding the placement.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 12:14 AM
A wonderful winning poem Probir. Congratulations on your deserving win! xxoo
Gupta Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 12:53 AM
Thank you, Connie ... I am much glad to go through your encouraging comments ...
Gauthier Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 9:40 PM
Beautiful imagery, Probiur. Congrats on your win.
Gupta Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 10:48 PM
Thank you, Line
Rodrigues Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 6:15 PM
Congratulations, Probir!
Gupta Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 10:48 PM
Thank you ...
Mcgee Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 3:49 PM
and now you have bouquets and wreaths to lift your mood too. Congrats on your placement!
Gupta Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 10:49 PM
Thank you so much ...
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July 27, 2019 at 3:38 PM
Probir, CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice
Gupta Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 10:50 PM
Thank you, Janice ...
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