Old Jackers

In the dictionary beside the word 'dementia' Is a picture of your man Jackers The description reads 'he's off his noodle' This man is totally crackers Not a sane thought in his whole damn noodle Couldn't handle it if there was Probably freak out and strip down naked Run hell bent from the fuzz Now Jackers shouldn't be judged too harshly He's really a gentle old soul Just that the years have caught up with old Jackers He's no longer the one in control So don't go feeling all depressed for this dude He's a real happy camper inside All he knows is he's loved by you friendlies And he's just along for the ride
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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January 31, 2018 at 5:55 PM
Jackers reminds me of stackers//those anchovy cheese kinds of crackers//like with my beer//darn near a tear//reading Jackers thweet thwackers. BEND ON NOODLIN' JACK!!!
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January 31, 2018 at 6:55 PM
You do realize this was NOT a limerick do you!!! LOL CHEERS!!! And don't sweat it my man... I'll understand if you go missing for a bit!!!
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January 31, 2018 at 10:27 AM
Love love LOVE this Jackers !!!!! Keep up those rhymes and narratives!!!
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January 31, 2018 at 10:43 AM
Must or else Silent One will send over the British militia!!! Sweet Judith, you always make me smile!!! Love, Old Jackers xoxoxox
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January 31, 2018 at 8:08 AM
My favourite Cracker Jack, always with a surprise. You is loved!! xomo <3
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January 31, 2018 at 8:37 AM
To quote Bonnie Raitt, "Let's give them something to talk about" ;)
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January 31, 2018 at 8:23 AM
Aww you is sweet Miss Mo! In fact took a look at your page... you get a lot a responses! GREAT!!! xoxoxox
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January 31, 2018 at 6:55 AM
I think Jackers is totally awesome!! Another grea tpoem...
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January 31, 2018 at 7:06 AM
Self destruction eh!!! All in fun... really I love me!!! LOL
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