Old Jack the Halloween Scrooge

Old Jack hated Halloween night.
The constant ringing of his doorbell
he didn't like. So he turned off his
household lights.
   His wife said, "Why did you go and 
do that, Jack?" he replied "They
won't see the house, and I'll get
some rest!"
    Little did Jack know that the Trick
or Treaters were determined. They
found his house, rang his doorbell
and Jacks anger just worsened!
   Every time Jack got up from his
easy chair, you could hear him
mumbling to himself, and start to
swear!
   The little kids would yell, "Trick
or Treat!" Jack would throw the
candy in their bags, and say half
jokingly, OK now let me be!
    The doorbell would ring over
and over again. Each time the dog
would bark and Jack would cringe!
    His wife would say, "Jack why
do you have to be so mean?" His
reply was, "These kids drive me
insane, non stop, that's why I hate 
this Halloween!"
    "Every year it's the same old
thing. The doorbell rings, and rings!"
     His wife said, "Jack can't you
see the joy you bring?" "It doesn't
matter if the doorbell rings,and
rings."
     "My parent's never took me
Trick or Treating. So, I never did
experience what little boys and
girls are feeling."
    She felt sad for Jack she took
him by the hand and said," It's never
too late Jack, if you are willing."
    They joined a group of children,
as they stopped and got some treats.
The homeowners looked at Jack in
wide- eyed disbelief!
     He noticed all the fun the children
felt, as they went from door to door!
And he felt a joy overtake his heart,
and something much, much, more!
     He and his wife said goodbye to
their little friends that night.
      And Jack became a little boy, as he
relived his boyhood side.
     Every year since he changed his
ways. Jack can't wait. To hear the
footsteps of his little friends, come,
Halloween day!
    His house lights are on, and his wife
is by his side. With a great big smile
he answers the door, and acts
frighteningly surprised! 
   The children love Jack, it's their
favorite house to go. He fills their bags
with so much candy, their bags just
overflow.
    
     

   

                               Screwed IX Contest Rob Carmack
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lindley Avatar
October 16, 2015 at 7:53 PM
Brilliantly creative writing my friend. Halloween was always a fun night for kids.. Running , playing and collecting sweets! Trick or treat was a night to be remembered when I was a kid--over 50+ years ago.A7
Tor Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 10:31 PM
Robert thank you so much for your kind comments. I remember like you when I was out there with my bag full of candy.45 years ago for me.
Dunn Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 6:06 PM
Dear Michael Excellent dude, wonderfully done love it, a marvelous scrooge for Halloween love it's lesson and moral, it made me laugh, a seven all the way. Cheri
Tor Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 6:11 PM
Thanks Cheri. I'm happy you were laughing.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 7:55 AM
How delightful now it is a favorite of mine as well.
Tor Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 5:49 PM
Richard so happy you liked it to make it one of your favorites. I am honored. It feels good when you can receive such feedback. Hope you are doing well my friend.
Y. Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 7:55 AM
Michael , I love this piece. To see Jack embrace Halloween by connecting with the little boy inside was such an amazing sight.Great job! :-) Alexis P. S. I see Jack liked it as well.
Tor Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 5:51 PM
Thank you Alexis for your kind comments. He did. I'm happy he did. We love Jack he is a gentleman and he has a great sense of humor that many on the Soup adore.
Muideen Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 4:44 AM
What a well written piece.....the flow of your depicted imagery that makes your write met with the reader like and love. Excellent one...........A.M.
Donnelly Ellis Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 1:04 AM
The conversion of Halloween Scrooge. Remarkable Job Michael
Tor Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 3:02 AM
Thank you so much Joan.
Onclaud Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 9:33 PM
a winsome tale portraying the fun spirit of hallow,michael... the lights are on!.. huggs
Tor Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 11:22 PM
Huggs back nette. I enjoyed writing this.
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 3:36 PM
wow, what a great tale about a guy who changes his mind by finally LIVING this fun event. I used to go trick or treating with my babies. Dressed up right along with them and some sour people did not even want to give me a treat. Geeez, can you believe it?
Tor Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 3:49 PM
Andrea I cant believe someone would not give you and your kiddies treats. That sounds pathetic. The people that gave made up for the ones that didn't. Life's experiences never seize to amaze me.
Smith Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 3:22 PM
Bet he has the good candy...excellent
Tor Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 3:46 PM
He has the best candy Tim. Thank you for your generous rating.
Raha Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 8:40 AM
A wonderful dedication,Michael.
Tor Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 3:44 PM
Thanks Miraj hope you are doing well my friend.
Trifiatis Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 8:17 AM
No matter what we are going to write about old, young, Jack, still a lot will be left to say! Great work my friend, Michael!
Tor Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 3:44 PM
Demetrios you are right. Thank you for your observations. I will be stopping by in a minute. To see your new creations.
Ellison Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 6:42 AM
I am honoured Michael Tor!!! You have nailed me good!!! My lights will be on! Good write that hit home! Happy Hall'o ween!
Tor Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 6:49 AM
Jack I hoped you enjoyed this. Happy Halloween to you my friend. I'll be visiting later on after work. I'm so happy you liked this Jack.
Konos Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 6:32 AM
hmmmmmm this has to be Jack Ellison...good one ...thanks
Tor Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 6:50 AM
Yes Judy your so right lol.
Andresen Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 4:38 AM
- A wonderful Halloween story, Michael :) - Old Jack, got the pleasure of experiencing the excitement and the joy :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Tor Avatar
October 8, 2015 at 6:50 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise.
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