Old House Song

Crossing over the threshold
creaks as loud as thunder
wallpaper peeling from years of old
like all of its memories of yonder

The wallboards and the floors
just bursting to tell
their many stories of yore
that only they knew too well

An old fireplace in its grandeur
with cracked bricks and holes
still has the same majestic hearth
heart of a loving home

Now leaning in sadness
empty and all alone
with loving care and tenderness
will again be a beautiful home

So as I strive to bring
its beauty back to life again
I can hear the old house sing
its proud song as it did once then
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 9, 2011 at 4:43 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals TuLisha. Love Carol
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February 21, 2011 at 1:34 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup TuLisha. Love, Carol
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April 12, 2009 at 10:10 AM
Tulisha, Nice imagery. I like it. Congratulations on your featured poem this week. Ernilando
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April 9, 2009 at 5:55 AM
Old houses seem to have a spirit of their own. (...maybe a few ghosts, too. just kidding) Enjoy the restoration. As you siad, the house will stand proud once again. Congratulations on being featured. Smiles from Dane.
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April 8, 2009 at 11:43 PM
Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week. Nice imagery, lovely poem. Well done. Smiles from Lolita
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April 8, 2009 at 8:00 PM
Tulisha- Love your name - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj
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April 8, 2009 at 7:08 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful featured poem! Well Done -great imagery! Laura :)
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April 6, 2009 at 7:20 PM
"Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week. GB, Always Tyesha
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April 6, 2009 at 4:23 PM
Nice use of imagery for a nostalgic write. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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April 6, 2009 at 1:22 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Beautiful write. Love, Shar
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April 6, 2009 at 6:32 AM
Congratulations on your Amazing poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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