Old Henry Vega

So many Cantankerous, old argumentative  men
Live all their days in misery,
Rehashing and recouping from an old war injury.
As Buster the dog slept soundly.

An rusty fishing rod, stood in the corner,
Buster the dog flaps his ear and wiggles his tail
 His friend sat in the same spot all day 
He just wants to go outside to play 

Arthritis in his knees
Aches and pain
And varicose veins
Acupuncture, homeopathy, and osteopathy,

His day are numbered to twenty antacids pills,
Who is the consultant of his will?
What would grandma think of old Henry Vega?
As he become the Messiah of misery
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Cavanaugh Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 9:06 AM
love the third stanza. and Messiah of misery. What a great ending. The whole poem is good i was just highlighting above what i loved the best. Great job.
Lander Avatar
August 12, 2025 at 7:27 AM
thank you for reading ...my work
Lander Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 10:33 AM
Thank you so much for your feedback I am improving as i go along. thank you for the boost.. one love annie
Palmer Avatar
September 11, 2012 at 6:45 PM
miserable old man,sounds like what we all become,lol,great write Annie
Lander Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 8:07 AM
Thank you Richard Palmer for comment it means a lot to me. one love annie
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