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Old Hallway In Winter Darkness

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A slight chill of cold darkness, air hit me as I roamed outside, I saw the red moon move a fence, alike a farmer with a glowing nose, I kept speaking and was sleepy the hopeless empyrean was everywhere, facing similar to town youth, accompanying their silvery faces. Dense snowflakes cover the soil living hibernates, beginning to wait breeze ice webs over the auld oaks light glancing through the jug divider The white being that triumphs over cold, life-inspiring affection for the opaline color. Cheering regardless of the snowstorm, In calm surges of artistry, the melancholy fear is calmed continuously, as the sunlight thinking dismisses ignorance, storms thunder inside the sheets, all epoch and mystery, the encounters blending quiet and blast, rainy environments and the moonlight. A riotous squirrel chastises me for crushing allure day. while I trespass into appeal rule without regard, the dust opposed the deep, foul perfume of decay, I mindlessly wander through colorful folding. Threaded accompanying auric, gold-colored, and azure. God's beauty has vitality-restorative power. Mother Nature protects the aforementioned advantage. Written: December 23, 2022 WINTER STORM Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 12/24/2022 9:41:00 PM
Hi Lasaad a wonderful depiction of a snow encased land and how you ease the situation for yourself in your writing of creative artistic work which is right before you looking through your window. God has shown and given us this awesome showcase so we can witness and create in poetic style the restorative power God has as he will restore mother nature and slowly the snow storm will abate..Hugs and blessings Happy holidays my friend Jennifer.
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Date: 12/23/2022 6:09:00 PM
wow, I'm all eyes on this one Sotto. Its a winning by far. Merry Christmas , love and joy peace and comfort, may they all be yours, with a good dose of good health for all.
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