Old Hair

Hail! Hail! A wicked storm to behold Scary as hell, as we watch the violence unfold We feared for our safety Cowered at it's intensity Thank goodness no damage, but my hair got old
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Makama Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 12:44 PM
This is excellent, precised and highly intellectual. A huge 7 for me.
Flats Avatar
May 19, 2017 at 9:04 PM
You mean your hair wasn't already old?//Mine fell out long ago I'm told//Gotta go shop//for a new crop//wherever those head rugs are sold. HAIL ON JACKSON!!!
Ellison Avatar
May 20, 2017 at 7:46 AM
For some reason, I figured you had a massive amount of gorgeous, almost grey hair!!! So can you buy an Elvis type rug???? LOL HAIL ON JOHN JOHN!!!
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