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Old Geezers

How come all my good buddies Look so much older than I? Guess they didn't take care of themselves That's surely the reason why Look at me, I'm still dapper and fit But my friends look frail and tired Can't believe we went to the same school Seems life has put out their fire Skin's all wrinkled, their hair is white Their teeth are not all their own Some even need the help of a cane As they search for their way back home Whoops! Just saw myself in a mirror Is this somebody's idea of a joke I'm so much younger than the image I see That's surely some other bloke Am I really one of those poor sad folks With brand new hips and knees Sure thought my friends were not aging well Turns out one of those guys is me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/19/2015 11:59:00 PM
You are so so so young at heart dearest. Enjoyed reading this one. Happy to read back to your older ones now that I am caught up with all the recent ones. Always, Laura
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/20/2015 8:26:00 AM
My body is ageing but my mind stays young! Amazing how that works! We really are the same person as we once were, full of life! Love, Jack xxx
Date: 8/17/2012 5:14:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your well written poetry this morning Jack. I hope to be able to read more of your poems soon. Have a wonderful weekend and thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/17/2012 5:33:00 AM
Just getting used to finding my way around this great site! I know I'm going to enjoy my stay because of all the warm hearts I've already met! Thanks for your kind words, Carol... love and big hugs, Jack xxxxxxxxx
Date: 8/16/2012 11:15:00 AM
Another smashing write Jack I love you sense of humour xx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/16/2012 12:56:00 PM
Reality has set in lately! Oh well, I've had a good life! LOL Love and hugs, Jack xxxxxx

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