Old Garden Sinks

I love how you created a line that really SHOWED us what you saw. Congrats for the win.

Congratulations on your win!

NETTE, Congrats on your monoku win. LOVE ** SKAT *

How beutifully you write Nette!Congrats on your well deserved placement!

Beautiful image Nette, I love the allegorical use of beauty as reference to decay and demise. (I saw "tangerine" referenced in a couple of the comments, did you change your poem?)

Nette, thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "FINALLY, WE WON" if you'd like. Take Care. LINDA --

I like the monoku....SKAT

great imagery.//congrats on win.//paul

a great poet with a well-deserved win. Congrats friend Nette :) It's our sem break already and I have more time reading poems here on PS. Have a blessed day always..mwuah!!! :)

I can picture a late autumn sun setting over this scene, love those tangerine leaves! congrats on your 1st place win :)

I thought it would be scarey but it was actualy quite beautiful.

this is utterly gorgeous imagery inside one short line. Congrats on your win.

- One Amazing Line - Congratulations on your fine win, Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Wow!!! Way to go..SK

i wish i could have a name like, "nette" ...too awesome poet, a treasure, a light, and all the beauties she owns... Congratulations, my highness!! ^__^

Draped by tangerine leaves........I cannot tell you how many times, I would love to 'borrow' one of your beautiful descriptions for my own!! Congratulations!

Congratulations on first place in my contest, sorry for the long delay in judging, I have had some eyesight problems. Constance

Stimulating vision here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

a real beauty!!!

I don't really understand Minoku, but this certainly awakens wonderful feelings, especially so when considering such paucity of verbiage.

Sometimes, the brighter side of nature can brighten even our gloomiest mood. I love the imagery in this poem! Terrific work, Nette!...Thank you so much for the wonderful comments. It really does mean a lot to me! :)

Dis looks like a winner monoku, tel me when u win. D contrasting visuals is great to read. Fond n Mery Xmas nette.

Excellent. Great image of work. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

The image I get from this write is truly striking my friend! I surely loved reading this tremendous poem this evening! You have pleased my senses with this delightful piece, the eye appeal is astounding Nette! Great Work!!

Image of bright, autumn leaves on a grave provides a deep contrast.Really works for me!