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Old Garden Sinks

old garden sinks in autumn, draped by withering russete leaves -------------------- Monoku or One-Liner #1 (Old/New)by SKAT

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2016 7:19:00 PM

I love how you created a line that really SHOWED us what you saw. Congrats for the win.

Susan Gentry

Date: 1/27/2016 2:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win!

Skat A

Date: 1/26/2016 11:28:00 AM

NETTE, Congrats on your monoku win. LOVE ** SKAT *

Balveen Cheema

Date: 1/25/2016 7:09:00 AM

How beutifully you write Nette!Congrats on your well deserved placement!

James Inman

Date: 1/25/2016 6:43:00 AM

Beautiful image Nette, I love the allegorical use of beauty as reference to decay and demise. (I saw "tangerine" referenced in a couple of the comments, did you change your poem?)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/24/2016 8:51:00 PM

Nette, thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "FINALLY, WE WON" if you'd like. Take Care. LINDA --

Skat A

Date: 3/15/2014 10:08:00 AM

I like the monoku....SKAT

Paul Callus

Date: 3/11/2014 3:10:00 PM

great imagery.//congrats on win.//paul

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 3/10/2014 11:17:00 PM

a great poet with a well-deserved win. Congrats friend Nette :) It's our sem break already and I have more time reading poems here on PS. Have a blessed day always..mwuah!!! :)

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/10/2014 5:30:00 PM

I can picture a late autumn sun setting over this scene, love those tangerine leaves! congrats on your 1st place win :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/10/2014 5:00:00 PM

I thought it would be scarey but it was actualy quite beautiful.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2014 4:58:00 PM

this is utterly gorgeous imagery inside one short line. Congrats on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/10/2014 4:38:00 PM

- One Amazing Line - Congratulations on your fine win, Nette. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/10/2014 4:16:00 PM

Wow!!! Way to go..SK

Aiyah Torres

Date: 3/10/2014 3:40:00 PM

i wish i could have a name like, "nette" ...too awesome poet, a treasure, a light, and all the beauties she owns... Congratulations, my highness!! ^__^

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/10/2014 2:56:00 PM

Draped by tangerine leaves........I cannot tell you how many times, I would love to 'borrow' one of your beautiful descriptions for my own!! Congratulations!

Constance La France

Date: 3/10/2014 2:45:00 PM

Congratulations on first place in my contest, sorry for the long delay in judging, I have had some eyesight problems. Constance

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/28/2013 8:46:00 PM

Stimulating vision here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2013 9:19:00 PM

a real beauty!!!

Mark Peterson

Date: 12/9/2013 7:51:00 PM

I don't really understand Minoku, but this certainly awakens wonderful feelings, especially so when considering such paucity of verbiage.

Kelly Deschler

Date: 12/9/2013 5:22:00 PM

Sometimes, the brighter side of nature can brighten even our gloomiest mood. I love the imagery in this poem! Terrific work, Nette!...Thank you so much for the wonderful comments. It really does mean a lot to me! :)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 12/8/2013 2:53:00 PM

Dis looks like a winner monoku, tel me when u win. D contrasting visuals is great to read. Fond n Mery Xmas nette.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 12/8/2013 12:51:00 AM

Excellent. Great image of work. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/7/2013 11:54:00 PM

The image I get from this write is truly striking my friend! I surely loved reading this tremendous poem this evening! You have pleased my senses with this delightful piece, the eye appeal is astounding Nette! Great Work!!

Amelie Mara

Date: 12/7/2013 5:19:00 PM

Image of bright, autumn leaves on a grave provides a deep contrast.Really works for me!