Old Feet

Old feet are wrinkled
Old feet are cracked
Old feet are traveled
 
Old feet still carry
Old feet still walk
Old feet still leave footprints



9/23/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 1:17 PM
Your poem speaks the truth. have a nice day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 8:26 PM
Your welcome xoxo
Gentile Avatar
September 27, 2017 at 5:11 PM
Thanks so much, Darlene!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 12:11 PM
Love the finale! Yes they do and they are missed when the trail comes to an end! Nice one, Mike!
Gentile Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 12:31 PM
Thanks Kim xxoo
Ashley Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 9:06 AM
A beautiful and very thoughtful write Mike. Well done and enjoyed :)
Gentile Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 10:20 AM
Thanks so much, Susan
Vaso Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 12:49 AM
and old feet still carry wise thoughts, great write!
Gentile Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 6:30 AM
Thanks so much, Arthur
Allison Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 5:50 PM
we still have a lot to learn if we follow in their footprints Mike:-) hugs jan xx
Gentile Avatar
September 24, 2017 at 7:12 AM
Yes indeed, thanks Jan xxoo
Sands Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 2:24 PM
And those feet carry us through life, Mike :) Happy Saturday !
Gentile Avatar
September 23, 2017 at 2:55 PM
Happy Saturday!
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