Old Days

i look back on the days and remember the times as I cried see them fly away and think of a rhyme i said some bad things did some stupid stuff even grin at a mistake but i guess my apologies weren't enough to hold onto

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Sean L Sanders

Date: 7/28/2013 4:39:00 PM

Congratz on being featured I know why to excellent poetry

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/28/2013 4:45:00 AM

Brian congrats on being featured Shadow x smiles

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/27/2013 9:44:00 PM

Brian,,, Congratulations, on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Take care & Goodnight... -xox- *LINDA

Skat A

Date: 7/14/2013 7:58:00 PM

Brian, a very deep way of expression them hurtful days, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT""

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/14/2013 3:54:00 AM

Hi, Brian. - A good written poem. - Like it a lot. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem !!!- Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise