Old Days

i look back on the days 
and remember the times as I cried  
see them fly away 
and think of a rhyme 
i said some bad things 
did some stupid stuff even grin at a mistake  
but i guess my apologies 
weren't enough to hold onto
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July 28, 2013 at 4:39 PM
Congratz on being featured I know why to excellent poetry
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July 28, 2013 at 4:45 AM
Brian congrats on being featured Shadow x smiles
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July 27, 2013 at 9:44 PM
Brian,,, Congratulations, on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Take care & Goodnight... -xox- *LINDA
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July 14, 2013 at 7:58 PM
Brian, a very deep way of expression them hurtful days, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT""
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July 14, 2013 at 3:54 AM
Hi, Brian. - A good written poem. - Like it a lot. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem !!!- Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise
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