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Old Chocolate Cake

Remember when we used to laugh About the way I did my math. Snorting and talking all throughout class; Blowing bubbles in our milkshake glass; All the tricks and jokes we used to make, You were then my chocolate cake. Remember when we used to speak A language formed at our friendship's peak. Talks that lasted for hours, Kept safe in hearts cuz' they were ours. Never thought our bond would forsake, For you were my chocolate cake. But as time passed, I couldn't keep this chocolate cake to last. It soon got spoiled and rotten, But the taste of our friendship was never forgotten. Knowing this makes my heart break, But,now, you are an old chocolate cake. S.B

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Date: 7/13/2016 8:28:00 PM
Good Stuff!! Love it
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Date: 5/12/2016 8:07:00 AM
Hi Sabrina, you know how much i loved this poem, but i just had to say it again. Keep on writing poetry!
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Date: 5/8/2016 10:12:00 PM
Sebrina....Welcome to the poetry soup....// U need some more practices... Then you would be better..... :)
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Date: 5/5/2016 10:58:00 PM
Sabrina, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/5/2016 10:32:00 PM
Sabrina, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.....//:) hugs
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