Written, October 23, 2024 For the International Contest, I Almost Tossed It Out Sponsor, John Lawless
Human Written
it was on a sunny day that sent me to exploring and I found an old cemetery inviting, sunlit and airy and I could smell drifting rosemary as I walked among the names my emotions were soaring I was lost in a sea of stones oh, tears came for the decayed bones buried among sun dappled tones my hair a dark river down my body flowing, pouring cotton candy flowers dying even the statues are sighing the vines, vines were really trying I almost tossed these lines out but for the question roaring will I be lost among the vines a dead poet who wrote nice lines will keep 'til I see how life untwines
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