JC Brul Poet Haiku

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For Brian Strand's Your Choice R Poetry Contest

1 June 2025

old bridge hiku

       
            wooden   b                  e      stood still
           * _________ r   i  d  g _____*
         ** _______________________**
             |    /           /|\                \  |
                 moss on ebony timbers~
                  unwritten poems dwell

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Andrea Dietrich June 2, 2025 at 11:43 PM A winner. Congrats

Andrea Dietrich June 2, 2025 at 11:40 PM So inventive!

Paula Goldsmith June 1, 2025 at 11:09 AM What a fun/creative "old bridge hiku" write. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed day writing away...............

Susan Ashley June 1, 2025 at 10:04 AM Dear Jcb, I adore wooden bridges and the nostalgic beauty and tone of your hiku. I love to imagine the stories old bridges (and houses too), could tell if only they could. Fantastic, my poet friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan