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New webs spreading in my past years that remain in the barn. An old barn that witnessed our games of a childhood reflected in a mirrow showing the faces of happiness. Spread webs turned into a nightmare. Not easy to remember the old barn where I used to play. Not easy to remember my old friends jumping on the dry grass kept in the barn. I'm trapped on a web, I can't remember how happy I was. I only remember the old barn and a few friends jumping happily. The old barn is still there, but the friends I never saw them again.

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Date: 11/23/2023 7:03:00 PM
This poetic masterpiece is a kaleidoscope of deep emotions and childhood memories. It has powerful metaphors and intense passion. Our thoughts are best expressed via such great poetry as our feelings change.
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/24/2023 12:48:00 AM
Very true Sotto. Thank you for leaving your wise and always kind comment. Have a great day!
Date: 11/23/2023 5:11:00 PM
i reallu enjoy your poetry, so close to me, what a superb inspiration, thanks Maria
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Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 11/23/2023 5:15:00 PM
Thank you Yann. That's nice...to be close. Have a nice evening xxx

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