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Old Age

Cherry Blossoms Bloom
Turns green in a few months 
Withers to orange
As the leaves fall to earth
As I too wither with it

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Beata Agustin

December 20, 2024 at 6:04 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

March 23, 2016 at 9:54 PM

Nice to see this one again, Ivan. LINDA

Skat A

January 16, 2016 at 5:43 PM

Hi Ivan, enjoyed reading the words you poured on your poem. Have a wonderful day. **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

December 12, 2013 at 10:26 AM

Hello, Ivan...,A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Aiyah Torres

December 12, 2013 at 10:04 AM

Welcome to PSoup, Ivan :)) Hope you enjoy sharing your talent here...same thing as I do...:") People here are so kind and supportive...Just keep on penning ;)) :') =))

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 12, 2013 at 7:48 AM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Ivan ! - Nice to read your first poem here.:)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)