Kiran Bantawa Poet Nonet

Old Age

Thumbnails of memories we rewind.

Reel of real life has come to halt.

The old age is the time for

Shaking hands, blurring eyes

To share one's know-hows

And prepare for

Soul's transmute

From the 

Chest.

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John Posey November 7, 2013 at 9:49 AM I've never attempted a nonet... I'm afraid now I couldn't come close to this one .... well done.... Jake Kiran Bantawa November 16, 2013 at 7:47 AM thanks and ya you try this from it's funny.

Skat A October 23, 2013 at 8:31 PM Kiran, , awesome Nonet form :) congrats... Love ~SKAT~ Kiran Bantawa October 23, 2013 at 9:31 PM thanks SKAT for reading.

Poet Destroyer A October 22, 2013 at 10:28 PM Kiran, . CONGRATULATIONS... XOX~ LINDA Kiran Bantawa October 23, 2013 at 4:35 PM thanks Linda!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders October 21, 2013 at 10:24 AM Congrats on your winning nonet, Kiran! Love and blessings, Rhonda Kiran Bantawa October 23, 2013 at 4:34 PM thank you Rhonda.

Sara Kendrick October 20, 2013 at 8:57 AM This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara Kiran Bantawa October 20, 2013 at 11:33 AM thanks for that Sara.

Joyce Johnson October 19, 2013 at 11:55 AM Congratulations on a great Nonet and win. Love, Joyce Kiran Bantawa October 20, 2013 at 11:34 AM thank you Joyce.

Andrea Dietrich October 19, 2013 at 1:44 AM very nicely done. BIG congrats for your win. Kiran Bantawa October 20, 2013 at 11:34 AM a BIG thanks to you Andrea.

Dr.Ram Mehta October 16, 2013 at 5:22 AM Thanks for the entry, Kiran Kiran Bantawa October 20, 2013 at 11:35 AM my pleasure.