Old Age

Thumbnails of memories we rewind. Reel of real life has come to halt. The old age is the time for Shaking hands, blurring eyes To share one's know-hows And prepare for Soul's transmute From the Chest.

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John Posey

Date: 11/7/2013 9:49:00 AM

I've never attempted a nonet... I'm afraid now I couldn't come close to this one .... well done.... Jake

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 11/16/2013 7:47:00 AM

thanks and ya you try this from it's funny.

Skat A

Date: 10/23/2013 8:31:00 PM

Kiran, , awesome Nonet form :) congrats... Love ~SKAT~

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/23/2013 9:31:00 PM

thanks SKAT for reading.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/22/2013 10:28:00 PM

Kiran, . CONGRATULATIONS... XOX~ LINDA

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/23/2013 4:35:00 PM

thanks Linda!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 10/21/2013 10:24:00 AM

Congrats on your winning nonet, Kiran! Love and blessings, Rhonda

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/23/2013 4:34:00 PM

thank you Rhonda.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/20/2013 8:57:00 AM

This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/20/2013 11:33:00 AM

thanks for that Sara.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/19/2013 11:55:00 AM

Congratulations on a great Nonet and win. Love, Joyce

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/20/2013 11:34:00 AM

thank you Joyce.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/19/2013 1:44:00 AM

very nicely done. BIG congrats for your win.

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/20/2013 11:34:00 AM

a BIG thanks to you Andrea.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/16/2013 5:22:00 AM

Thanks for the entry, Kiran

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 10/20/2013 11:35:00 AM

my pleasure.