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How time goes racing now when there's no need to-- when there's so little farther left to go: over the river--under the trees. Time ought to lead us slow...slow! --Archibald MacLeish 1892-1982 We talk about bodily functions, what works and what doesn't. We talk about medications, and name them one by one hoping we will win the who has the most contest. We talk about obituaries written daily in the local paper, jokingly relieved when we are not in it. We talk about family and tell the same stories we have told and heard for decades, laughing or crying in certain places as if it is our first time hearing the telling~ knowing our world is getting smaller with each passing day, that soon we will be only names on a gravestone, trampled and forgotten in Time's relentless march.

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Date: 2/8/2024 1:08:00 PM
oh my, yes, how time marches on and indeed we do many of these things. The one I do not do is look at obituaries!! Well done, Chetta.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 2/8/2024 1:14:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 2/8/2024 5:40:00 AM
So true. The timeless truth so poetically said. I relate totally with the sentiments, Chetta, especially the last lines.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 2/8/2024 8:02:00 AM
The older I and my social circle become the truer the poem becomes.
Date: 2/7/2024 5:21:00 PM
this poem reminds me so much of my husband and I and are married couple friends. Your poem was poignant in that it made me stop and think about our 'habitual' talks, etc., as time marches on...perhaps we need to change what we do and talk about...hmmm. :-)
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Chetta Achara
Date: 2/7/2024 5:49:00 PM
Yes. But the folks in my circle seem experience the same things at the same times, so that steers the conversations.
Date: 2/7/2024 4:39:00 PM
GAAA! Ever so ghastly. Still, there is a certain inevitably. Sigh
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Chetta Achara
Date: 2/7/2024 5:46:00 PM
Indeed there is.

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