Old Age

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Tomorrow is a birthday of the gravest consequence...
Proclivity denied in me the ancient, awful truth
but I now see quite clearly from the Crone's side of the fence,
the aperture slam shut upon the saga of my youth

I feel the marrow turn to dust inside each drying bone,
all nuance of fertility drains from my barren womb
I pray that in my final hours, I won't be left alone
to hear the bells a-tolling, as now, I'm aware for whom!

I'm bound to be quite feeble, if I make it past the day
Please, look in on me often to attest that I am fine
It's with temerity, though, that I hold on, anyway,
with luck, perhaps I'll see the ripe old age of twenty-nine...

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10/29/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Roper Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 9:10 AM
Lycia, I enjoyed reading and love the way you used the 8 words . The body has to grow old and I hate it. Congratulations on your win.
Hamilton Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 9:54 PM
Congrats Lycia on a fine placement!
Harding Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 9:04 AM
Thank you for the placement, John. Fun and most challenging contest - keep 'em comin'! LyLy xoxo
Barden Avatar
November 27, 2018 at 8:18 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in John's 8-word contest, Lycia - this was not an easy challenge, but very rewarding, I think. Blessings to you and yours for a wonderful holiday season - ah, to be so "old" again! ;-) <3
Sheehan Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 12:52 PM
Wonderful write. Great take on the aging process. Enjoyed immensely.
Harding Avatar
November 6, 2018 at 1:31 PM
Hahaha! Thank you, Frank. It's for a contest in which we had to use eight specific words. Fun! xoxo
Sergi Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 11:41 AM
29? Sooo old. I was expecting a climatic ending of a wizened person but you fool me! A great poem, Lycia
Harding Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 1:09 PM
Hahaha! Fooled ya- It's just a melodramatic young GIRL. Thanks, Ralph! xoxo
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