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I spent about a third of my Army career (1987-2007) stationed in West Germany, then Germany.  I've been to Oktoberfest in Munich many times, and to the opening day parade in September at least twice.  Oktoberfest starts in September because of the calendar change a few centuries ago--back then it was in October.  Personally, I don't drink; I came for the atmosphere and the amusement park rides.  I've been to several shows at the Munich beerhalls too, such as at the Hofbrau Haus and the Platzl.

Oktoberfest In Munich--Etheree

Beer
Barrels
On wagons,
Surrounded by
Bavarian girls
In folkloric costumes-
Waving at all the tourists,
Raising beer steins as they roll by.
The beginning of Oktoberfest....
The opening parade's in September!
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Kendrick Avatar
October 3, 2015 at 6:33 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Etherees are delightful..Sara
Halliday Avatar
October 5, 2015 at 12:44 PM
Thanks Sara
A  Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 10:28 PM
Mark, congratulations on your awesome Etheree win. <3 SKAT
Halliday Avatar
October 5, 2015 at 12:44 PM
Thanks Skat
Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2015 at 2:23 AM
Nice description of this event! Congrats in my contest.
Halliday Avatar
October 2, 2015 at 9:34 PM
Thanks Andrea.
Haight Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 9:37 PM
A great Etheree, Mark! It says it all! We've have had the pleasure of partaking in these Oktoberfests twice when we visited our son and his family when they were stationed in Germany some years ago. Well written, and all the best in the contest. Sandra
Halliday Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 6:04 PM
Thanks for commenting Sandra. The Army used to host a German-American fest in Munich back in the 80s, coinciding with the 4th of July. Have some good memories of that too.
Inman Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 3:12 PM
I like Etherees and this one is well done. I have a few but Andrea has tons. Good job, Mark.
Halliday Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 6:08 PM
Thanks James. Kinda like them too, but strive more for good rhymes as I focus on songwriting more than poetry,
Y. Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 1:56 AM
Mark, I enjoyed the flow of your etheree. It is filled with fun. You capured the feeling of "having a good time" really well.Good luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Halliday Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 6:05 PM
Thanks for commenting A.Y.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 1:07 AM
This is delightful Mark. I have visited at that time but never go to go. Best of luck in the contest!
Halliday Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 1:39 AM
Glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting. I was very fond of Munich and Bavaria.
Leiser Avatar
September 20, 2015 at 3:55 PM
Great etheree, Mark! Good description of Oktoberfest! Good luck in the contest :)
Halliday Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 1:39 AM
Glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting. I was very fond of Munich and Bavaria.
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