Oklahoma Tango

Great words that tell about Oklahoma.Thanks for sharing.Teresa

there is a grace in this poem i love it :)

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I can see the scene. I didn't know that Oklahoma has red soil. We have it here. If you will stick to it when it's dry, it will stick to you when it's wet. Keep writing. Sara

Amazing Haiku,vivid your comparison.Sincerely, Moses

Great rhythm for dancing in this haiku, Abe! Let's tango together on the "red fertile soil." Very imaginative! Love, Carolyn

Fabulous! You guys have a great thing going, here! Hugs, Donna

This is a very beautiful. indeed you have painted a marvelous picture with your words, fabulous imagery, smooth tone written in perfect traditional haiku format. It is a pleasure to have read for you. Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Delightful and scenic piece Abe >> James

I can remember a time when some here at the Soup did not like reading Haiku. They did not consider them poetry and did not think it took anything to just jot them out. I for one have always loved them I know it takes more then a jot down on paper. I think it is absolutely fantastic that more and more of the Soupers are writing them and sharing them with us. Cheers to you all. You are saying so much with your 5 7 5 syllables. You all rock in my book. Love, Carol

The Tango,just love the tango,every verse leading to the ballroom,beautful,many favs today..to my Favs Abe-Charma

Nice response to my haiku, love the red fertile soil and the great plains ballroom. You are on fire with your work...Raul

Wonderful imagery for a creative view. Nice use of personification. What a wonderful tribute to Raul, another talented haiku writer. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Great job, I like this one, very creative, keep them coming...Danny

I can hear the Latin music!! Love this joyful haiku!! ~ Love, Carrie

Hi, I'm studying Haiku and this is a good one. Thanks Marty