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Oklahoma Tango

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             the dancing wheat fields 
                         tango with red fertile soil
                                        in great plain's ballroom










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this write is in response to Raul's - Countryside Waltz -

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/12/2009 2:11:00 PM
Great words that tell about Oklahoma.Thanks for sharing.Teresa
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Date: 10/31/2009 8:59:00 AM
there is a grace in this poem i love it :)
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Date: 10/28/2009 4:47:00 PM
Oklahoma Tango it is....Diogenes
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Date: 10/14/2009 1:19:00 AM
Left you some mail
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Date: 10/13/2009 6:43:00 AM
I can see the scene. I didn't know that Oklahoma has red soil. We have it here. If you will stick to it when it's dry, it will stick to you when it's wet. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/12/2009 6:20:00 PM
Amazing Haiku,vivid your comparison.Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 10/9/2009 1:47:00 PM
Great rhythm for dancing in this haiku, Abe! Let's tango together on the "red fertile soil." Very imaginative! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/7/2009 11:03:00 PM
Fabulous! You guys have a great thing going, here! Hugs, Donna
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Date: 10/7/2009 5:40:00 PM
This is a very beautiful. indeed you have painted a marvelous picture with your words, fabulous imagery, smooth tone written in perfect traditional haiku format. It is a pleasure to have read for you. Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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Date: 10/7/2009 12:33:00 PM
Delightful and scenic piece Abe >> James
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Date: 10/7/2009 9:50:00 AM
I can remember a time when some here at the Soup did not like reading Haiku. They did not consider them poetry and did not think it took anything to just jot them out. I for one have always loved them I know it takes more then a jot down on paper. I think it is absolutely fantastic that more and more of the Soupers are writing them and sharing them with us. Cheers to you all. You are saying so much with your 5 7 5 syllables. You all rock in my book. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/6/2009 10:18:00 PM
The Tango,just love the tango,every verse leading to the ballroom,beautful,many favs today..to my Favs Abe-Charma
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Date: 10/6/2009 9:23:00 PM
Nice response to my haiku, love the red fertile soil and the great plains ballroom. You are on fire with your work...Raul
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Date: 10/6/2009 8:43:00 PM
Wonderful imagery for a creative view. Nice use of personification. What a wonderful tribute to Raul, another talented haiku writer. Keep up the good writing. Karen
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Date: 10/6/2009 7:45:00 PM
Great job, I like this one, very creative, keep them coming...Danny
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Date: 10/6/2009 6:42:00 PM
I can hear the Latin music!! Love this joyful haiku!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 10/6/2009 6:39:00 PM
Hi, I'm studying Haiku and this is a good one. Thanks Marty
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