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Oklahoma Black Sky

She was a freckled faced child who dreamed of being loved... He was nothing but a heartless bastard who hated everyone, especially us. She was the protector of her sisters and stood up to him as tears rolled down her angel face... His day of reckoning came one sweltering Oklahoma summer in July... She entered the house to the cries of her mother, begging for him to stop.. The angel child had suddenly become the protector of her mom.. She grabbed his belt which lay nearby and swung with all she had... Blood streamed down the side of his face and down the front of his shirt... The only cries now were from him and no longer from her mother.... I love you, mom... Your loving daughter, Sharky

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Date: 4/9/2014 10:16:00 PM
Char, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/8/2014 1:18:00 PM
What a powerful poem this is . We always talk about a mother's love, but a daughter's love is also deep. I am glad I have a daughter. Welcome to our community of poets. Thanks for sharing your first poem... Lucilla
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Char Vanderbilt
Date: 4/8/2014 2:03:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind words and welcoming me to your community of poets...it truly means alot to me... Many Thanks, Char
Date: 4/8/2014 1:03:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Char :) - I choose your first great and well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Char Vanderbilt
Date: 4/8/2014 2:08:00 PM
Anne-Lise... thank you for taking the time to read my first poem...all this has been very therapeutic for me.. Thanks for your kind words.... Many Thanks, Char
Date: 4/8/2014 5:08:00 AM
Welcome Char and your first Poem is indeed a reckoning! Well written with much conveyance of emotion! Welcome to the Soup where you are free to write freely. I will pass along what one member instructed is Rule: #1 - Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). Again, welcome aboard!
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Char Vanderbilt
Date: 4/8/2014 2:14:00 PM
Hi Michael... Thanks for your kind words about my first poem... It truly means alot to me coming from someone as talented as yourself...and also congrats on your retirement from the Navy...I really enjoyed seeing all the wonderful pictures... Many Thanks, Char
Date: 4/7/2014 11:12:00 PM
Char, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Char Vanderbilt
Date: 4/7/2014 11:33:00 PM
Linda.. thank you so much for the invite...that truly means alot to me...I would very much like to be a part of your contest... Many Thanks, Char

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