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What once was a home, Is now a mess, Many left homeless,without any hope, But the community pitched in, and a flag stood proudly, Every1 stared and prayed oh so loudly, Although it is sad, People smile, as neighbors and helpers, Helped clean some rubbles, So thank you god, not for the damage, But for showing us the true meaning of friendship

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/4/2013 7:54:00 AM
A very warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Selena. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us and have a wonderful week. Love, Carol"""
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Date: 5/26/2013 3:57:00 AM
Selena, a sad poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/25/2013 12:02:00 PM
Sad Salena, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~
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