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Okay, I'M Still Waitin

A couple real friends, a couple fake ones A couple real feelings, a couple jaded Side effects of the fact that We'll never make it When I try to take my time Usually it's your time I'm takin And when you not around I'm sittin round waitin Try to be dedicated ...just be talkin **** Yeah, defecatin Maybe I like to suffer Cuz love is suffocatin I love to be smuthered Like mothers potatoes Then leave all a sudden Searching for the perfect station All I hear is static Stagnation Don't panic I'm still paintin Bout to have stroke, every stroke is greatness Waitin for love... ....Okay I'll keep waitin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/1/2015 11:57:00 AM
This one is very well stitched together with style and deep feelings brought together by your poetic soul. A sad song like poem that flows with a troublesome beat. Emile. #7
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Lauren Patton
Date: 12/1/2015 4:09:00 PM
Ahh, your comment is like a song my friend, appreciate it!
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Lauren Patton
Date: 12/1/2015 2:01:00 PM
Ahh, your comment is like a song my friend, appreciate it!

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