Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet Poet Free verse

Ok Honey Bun My Shining Sun

Ok honey bun my shining sun among the loving blaze of fire you run.
Tuns of blazed loving power, in a shining sun.
On a blazing sun of love you run until your time to 
sleep.

leap honey bun, leap honey bun, leap to sleep.

Ok honey bun my looming moon,sweep your feet like a broom,
off the sun on the moon,to enjoy a rest in looms cradle .

Ok honey bun my shining sun tomorrow on the sun ill see you run,on flames of loving fire
ill see you run.

sweet,sweet,sweet honey bun never melting on my loving sun.

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Justcallme Britt June 15, 2012 at 9:13 PM AAAAAAAAAWWWW what a poet!

Nette Onclaud April 11, 2012 at 1:25 AM delighted by this charming piece, eliot... the repetition works and so does "honeybun"... :) huggs! Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet April 11, 2012 at 1:31 AM thank you much.

Kabuteng P.Ink K. April 10, 2012 at 11:43 PM This is a sweet read, elliot :D I enjoyed how you used terms of endearment here :D It somehow also reminded me of You are My Sunshine :D Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet April 11, 2012 at 12:21 AM thank you...