...Oil All the Hinges

oil all the hinges
silence the light with rose pink…
hide the computer


*advise to lovers :P
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
August 23, 2010 at 5:54 AM
Congratulations on your win Deborah in Linda-Marie's contest "Awesome Advice"(For The Bride & Groom). Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 9:19 PM
Just saw your placement.In my book it's a number one!
Haick Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 7:28 PM
Congratulations on your win, Deborah! Peace, love, Audrey
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 3:40 PM
Congrats with whatever your "number" was. I would sure place this one high!!
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 3:39 PM
hahaha, VERY good advice for Miss gadgets. hahaha. Luv, Andrea
Cwiak Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 9:11 PM
Deborah, I can appreciate "Oiling the hinges" when lovers are involved... Great write and congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C.
Roberts Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 6:17 PM
good advise, congrats on your win
Johnson Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 4:23 PM
Wiose words. I like your attitude. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Taylor Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 3:47 PM
Congrats, Deb.Nice going. Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
August 21, 2010 at 7:50 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Debbie..however the system will not allow me to finalize or post my winners list due to technical problems on site.. so enjoy with luv..ciao..
Roberts Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 11:25 PM
cute one, good advise
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