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Oho my dream go away

Oho my dream go away...... I dreamt of you so much and that's enough for time being and let me have your reality that will play in my heart tenderly I am already late to embrace your arms around me and to give my body for physical sentimental touch All these days I kept my thoughts positive move because I want my dream come true one day. The days have come now that I want to be near you There is a place for us where we stay in chosen path Sometimes the paths are long, short and rough but always end as a beautiful world for us I want to see your charming beauty in the moon light and I want my nights to cover with silky clouds Let my loneliness go away while I step into your world and let those music play melodies while you hug me Let your arms around my shoulder with your finger touch and let our dance roll on the floor with passionate love Let your lips lock my lips with your inner feelings and let your heat burn my thrust for move love Oh my dream go away and bring me reality with love. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ 2016 Ravi Sathasivam

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Date: 2/24/2017 4:20:00 AM
- First: Welcome back, hope you had a wonderful holiday Ravi :) - Sorry I have not seen this poem before - A deeply moving poem - Dreams can be beautiful .. . but it is the reality we always seek - Beautifully written, Ravi - Nice to see you :) - Best wishes for a great weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 2/24/2017 8:14:00 AM
Thank you very much. Appreciate your comment on my poem and also nice to hear from you. Best wishes and have a great weekend. Hugs and kisses. Ravi
Date: 1/25/2017 6:46:00 AM
wonderful poetry Ravi..
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 2/24/2017 4:04:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment. Appreciated. Just come back from vacation after 2 months.
Date: 1/12/2017 9:55:00 AM
wow i can imagine what ever u wrote so nicely written
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 2/24/2017 4:04:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment. Appreciated. Just come back from vacation after 2 months.
Date: 12/21/2016 3:55:00 AM
Very interesting your poem like a Tamil movie!Keep up going!
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 12/21/2016 10:27:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Appreciated.
Date: 12/18/2016 8:36:00 AM
I enjoyed this romantic poem which is as beautiful in dreams as it is would be in reality, Ravi. ~ May I wish you and all your loved ones a happy, blessed Christmas and all the best for 2017. Regards // paul
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 12/21/2016 10:28:00 AM
Thank you very much, appreciated too.
Date: 12/16/2016 8:59:00 PM
very cool title for this fantasy poem, Ravi. Love that last line!!!
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 12/21/2016 10:29:00 AM
Thank you very much . appreciated Andrea. Hugs Ravi
Date: 12/15/2016 6:38:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this romantic write, Ravi... Hugs Eve
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 12/16/2016 9:38:00 AM
Thank you very much my dear friend Eve Roper. Very much appreciated. Me going on vacation for 2 months. I wish you Merry Christmas and Happy New Year 2017.
Date: 12/15/2016 7:15:00 AM
Wonderful write ... Delightful dream ... Profound Passion ... Enjoyed reading ...
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 12/15/2016 7:27:00 AM
Thank you very much my dear friend Probir. Very much appreciated. Me going on vacation for 2 months. I wish you Merry Christmas and Happy New Year 2017.
Date: 12/15/2016 1:21:00 AM
A beautiful passionate piece Ravi. Sometimes dreams do come true. : )
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 12/15/2016 1:50:00 AM
Thank you very much my dear friend Connie. Very much appreciated. Me going on vacation for 2 months. I wish you Merry Christmas and Happy New Year 2017.