Oho My Dream Go Away

Oho my dream go away...... I dreamt of you so much and that's enough for time being and let me have your reality that will play in my heart tenderly I am already late to embrace your arms around me and to give my body for physical sentimental touch All these days I kept my thoughts positive move because I want my dream come true one day. The days have come now that I want to be near you There is a place for us where we stay in chosen path Sometimes the paths are long, short and rough but always end as a beautiful world for us I want to see your charming beauty in the moon light and I want my nights to cover with silky clouds Let my loneliness go away while I step into your world and let those music play melodies while you hug me Let your arms around my shoulder with your finger touch and let our dance roll on the floor with passionate love Let your lips lock my lips with your inner feelings and let your heat burn my thrust for move love Oh my dream go away and bring me reality with love. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ 2016 Ravi Sathasivam
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Andresen Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 4:20 AM
- First: Welcome back, hope you had a wonderful holiday Ravi :) - Sorry I have not seen this poem before - A deeply moving poem - Dreams can be beautiful .. . but it is the reality we always seek - Beautifully written, Ravi - Nice to see you :) - Best wishes for a great weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sathasivam Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 8:14 AM
Thank you very much. Appreciate your comment on my poem and also nice to hear from you. Best wishes and have a great weekend. Hugs and kisses. Ravi
Horsman Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 6:46 AM
wonderful poetry Ravi..
Sathasivam Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 4:04 AM
Thank you very much for your comment. Appreciated. Just come back from vacation after 2 months.
Tanwar Avatar
January 12, 2017 at 9:55 AM
wow i can imagine what ever u wrote so nicely written
Sathasivam Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 4:04 AM
Thank you very much for your comment. Appreciated. Just come back from vacation after 2 months.
Thajudeen Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 3:55 AM
Very interesting your poem like a Tamil movie!Keep up going!
Sathasivam Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 10:27 AM
Thank you my friend. Appreciated.
Callus Avatar
December 18, 2016 at 8:36 AM
I enjoyed this romantic poem which is as beautiful in dreams as it is would be in reality, Ravi. ~ May I wish you and all your loved ones a happy, blessed Christmas and all the best for 2017. Regards // paul
Sathasivam Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 10:28 AM
Thank you very much, appreciated too.
Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 8:59 PM
very cool title for this fantasy poem, Ravi. Love that last line!!!
Sathasivam Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 10:29 AM
Thank you very much . appreciated Andrea. Hugs Ravi
Roper Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 6:38 PM
Enjoyed reading this romantic write, Ravi... Hugs Eve
Sathasivam Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 9:38 AM
Thank you very much my dear friend Eve Roper. Very much appreciated. Me going on vacation for 2 months. I wish you Merry Christmas and Happy New Year 2017.
Gupta Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 7:15 AM
Wonderful write ... Delightful dream ... Profound Passion ... Enjoyed reading ...
Sathasivam Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 7:27 AM
Thank you very much my dear friend Probir. Very much appreciated. Me going on vacation for 2 months. I wish you Merry Christmas and Happy New Year 2017.
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 1:21 AM
A beautiful passionate piece Ravi. Sometimes dreams do come true. : )
Sathasivam Avatar
December 15, 2016 at 1:50 AM
Thank you very much my dear friend Connie. Very much appreciated. Me going on vacation for 2 months. I wish you Merry Christmas and Happy New Year 2017.
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