Ohio River At Sunset

lights flicker on the far side
as Kentucky folds its dark robes

a barge nudges
the river into dusk

bundles of clouds kindle

a shimmering pause

the river opens its body
to swallow the sun

knee deep in shadow
a heron yawps 

silver fish ripple through
shoaling branches

here on a crooked pier
spawning stars surface
from the milky eyes
of the recently drowned

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 8/22/2019 12:04:00 PM
That was so cool, so picturesque, as if a painting of words. What a beautiful scene you've created.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 8/22/2019 12:20:00 PM
Thanks Chris, it has been said that as poets, words are our paint. Great review.
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