Juli- Michelle Poet Rhyme

Oh Your Smile

Oh your smile brightly gleams
In my sweet summer dreams
In the sun-reflected streams
Then your smile beams
brightly again

Ones again the summer goes 
Its a bummer that the drummer 
Cried on the plummers fries 

Oh your smile is pretty
Its most pretty 
In the city

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Dan Kearley December 8, 2012 at 2:21 AM I'll give you a smile.. :o)

Jane Kostman June 15, 2012 at 10:12 AM Very good write here! I can imagin it now...in the city where I live just watching for the prettyest smile....like my hubbys.... hope to see ya around more Jane

Life Taken The Wrong Way January 3, 2012 at 6:06 PM nice poem Julie it's got a nice ring to it! ~Mini Dr. Dover

Cheryle Sanders January 1, 2012 at 3:13 PM Cried on the plummers fries, very amusing.

Juli- Michelle January 1, 2012 at 2:50 PM hey nice work your awesome