Oh Word

while words play hide and seek in my mind while they sink and float resisting their definition and my determination to recite when there is a resignation of words in my mind that lead me to a world of confusion I will take out my pen and paper where my solution is found there is a story I want to tell, but oh! sorry something holds me back with all the information I have, its hard to share for I am held back by my situation Ingcinga nengcingane zam zingcikiv'ubuciko bam ndancama ndatsho ngezwi ndathi " gama hlala nam ziziphithiphithi zalaph'eziphithanise ingcinga zam , lafika lon'iphango njenge ngxangxasi yamanzi, zehl'iinyembezi zam I sat and I said...Oh! word,,, you got nothing left for me??,,,I wanna recite,, I want to talk

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Skat A

Date: 1/20/2016 8:17:00 PM

ODWA, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**

Tim Smith

Date: 6/18/2014 7:48:00 AM

Your muse is playing games with you...Be happy and your words will flow my friend...give my love to your gogo....Tim

Odwa Dlanga

Date: 6/18/2014 7:29:00 AM

let me take this opportunity and thank you all for your sweet messages...im happy to be a poetrySoup family member...and thanks for complementing my poem, im a growing poet eager to learn a lot from great poets :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/8/2014 12:33:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Odwa :) - I choose your first good written poem - Well done !! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/4/2014 11:41:00 AM

Odwa, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Faye Gibson

Date: 6/3/2014 6:04:00 PM

Welcome to PoetrySoup, Odwa. Here's hoping you enjoy getting to know people in this community, Keep writing and enjoy reading the poetry of others. If you comment on other's poems, many will return the favor. Best wishes.

James Hyler

Date: 6/3/2014 4:32:00 PM

Thank you for sharing :)

Skat A

Date: 6/3/2014 2:56:00 PM

Odwa,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT