Oh What the Hell

I really don't feel like writing
The day was hot, and I don't feel well
And I can't think of a thing to say
But, Oh what the hell

I shouldn't bother, I should relax 
Don't even have a story to tell
I should go in and take a shower
But, Oh what the hell

So there, I wrote it and it stinks
They'll turn away to avoid the smell
If I were smart I wouldn't post this
But, Oh what the hell !

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 9/3/2018 8:35:00 PM
G'day Jerry … if a writer doesn't go through a tunnel from time to time, then they're hardly a writer at all. The good thing about this is, there is a light at the end of the tunnel - enjoyed your verse Jerry - Lindsay
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Date: 9/2/2018 11:20:00 AM
Who hasn't felt like this, fun stuff Jerry, I love it...
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Date: 8/31/2018 9:25:00 PM
It made me laugh Jerry and I am happy you posted it! Every creation doesn't have to be this profound piece of work! Thanks for the humor! : )
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/1/2018 6:06:00 PM
Thanks Connie I know every creation will not be profound but I sure look forward to writing one someday lol
Date: 8/31/2018 7:28:00 PM
I am laughing and learning and loving this poem, Jerry! I am SO GLAD you honored us by trusting us with it.
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Date: 8/31/2018 6:00:00 PM
Hello Jerry T. Curtis, You wrote the feelings you were feeling at the time. Sometimes it is hard to create a poem when the words do not come out. Keep on creating your poetry.Have a nice evening my friend. Nice to meet you.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/4/2018 1:19:00 PM
Your welcome my friend.
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 9/1/2018 6:02:00 PM
Thank you Darlene
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