Notes About The Poem

Oh, Waters Beguile

Impermeable waters thrill the air
To invigorate tiptoes everywhere,
Dizzy where moist grasses and blooms unfurl
As herons pirouette through a curved swirl,
Where mist, in full hydration, reels a while
Its tangy perfume …the senses beguile! 

As crystallization forms like soft ice
From mild gushes, flowing tendrils baptize
The requisite weave of crests, its tidal intent
Where islet’s  limbs end a water dance’s fest
Oh, precipitation  of gust crowns the moon
Tugging lovers and dreams in  a ballad’s tune.


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4/16/2016
Elements Part 3: Water Contest of Brian Davey
~Hydration, Requisite, Precipitation,
Impermeable, Invigorate, Crystallization~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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April 27, 2016 at 11:59 PM
Nette, Congrats on your win. XOX ~LINDA~
Macmillan Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 8:17 AM
OH NETTE. This is really lovely. WOW!!! The content, the lines, remind me that rhyme can be will done, can not sound forced and be filled with uncommon word pairings and imagery so thick that they rhyme seems coincidental instead of intentional. Stunning. Soup etiquette says, don't say should have placed higher. LOL. You know me... I'm not so good with etiquette. First, in my books. xoxoxo your absent Sis.
Macmillan Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 3:23 PM
First tied. Nette, did you read Charlotte's entry? Stunning, as well. Free verse you would relish, as much as I did. Hugs.
A. Sharma Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 10:25 PM
Congrats on superb win with this exquisite write nette..
Roper Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 5:52 PM
BIG congrats to you, sweet friend. Hugs Eve
Scars Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 11:44 AM
Nette, beautiful...congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
Devnath  Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 8:00 AM
Congrats on your beautiful win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Davey Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 6:41 AM
Congratulations Nette on your placement in my Water Element contest! You used the 6 words exceptionally well in this write! Thank you for entering
Lalion Avatar
April 16, 2016 at 3:00 AM
You certainly beguile with this lustrous, exhilarating poem!
Gonza Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 3:33 PM
Such majesty that the even a seemingly water-lover like you can create when sailing across her is deep and rich through this extraordinary poem. Congratulations on your recent medals!
Andresen Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 3:27 PM
- What a glorious poem, in image, words and delicious perfume, Nette :) - Good luck in contest - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 2:04 PM
You wove the words in so beautifully Nette:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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