Hija De La Luna Poet Villanelle

Oh Vulnerable Woman

What a beauty you are!
In this very life, my life!
Oh vulnerable woman!

In your fertile womb,
Precious little life,
What a beauty you are!

Lovely soul takes life bids,
Without hesitation,
Oh vulnerable woman!

Without your weakness,
You would not offer love,
What a beauty you are!

Selfless is your existence;
Yielding self to a small one,
Oh vulnerable woman!

Your delicate body gifted life,
And life gives peace as price,
What a beauty you are!
Oh vulnerable woman!


8/11/14

** This is dedicated to my wonderful mother who took the risk of giving us all 
her children - LIFE. My salute to all mothers whose vulnerability is a true 
beauty!!

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Joyce Johnson August 17, 2014 at 8:56 PM Nice dedication to your Mom and to all mothers. Congratulations. Love, Joyce Hija De La Luna August 18, 2014 at 12:56 AM thanks, joyce! to all the mothers out there i am just overwhelmed by the love they have and will even risk their lives. love and light!!

Dr.Ram Mehta August 16, 2014 at 1:14 AM Nice dedication to your mother with this emotional write, Luna. My daughter's name is Luna. She is in Windsor Canada. I have written a poem on Luna with the same title. Hija De La Luna August 16, 2014 at 9:14 PM Thank you, Dr. Ram. Nice to know you have a daughter named Luna. will check that poem :))

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 15, 2014 at 10:54 PM Wonderful write n so is the win Luna! congrats on top win! Hija De La Luna August 16, 2014 at 9:14 PM thank you, Dr. Upma! God bless you!

Poet Destroyer A August 15, 2014 at 9:26 PM you are welcome, thanks for the reply

Poet Destroyer A August 15, 2014 at 9:06 PM congratulations, Hija... Linda Hija De La Luna August 15, 2014 at 9:16 PM Thank you, Linda! God bless you :)

Tim Smith August 15, 2014 at 2:57 PM Congratulations to you and your Mother...hugs Tim Hija De La Luna August 15, 2014 at 8:53 PM Thanks, Tim :) hugs

Faye Gibson August 15, 2014 at 2:12 PM A beautiful win, Luna; congratulations. Hija De La Luna August 15, 2014 at 8:53 PM Thank you, Faye! God bless you!

Jan Allison August 15, 2014 at 2:06 PM dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx Hija De La Luna August 15, 2014 at 8:52 PM thanks, Jan! hugs :))

Shadow Hamilton August 15, 2014 at 1:43 PM hi Hija and welcome to soup a stunning write of dedication congrats on 1st place hugs Hija De La Luna August 15, 2014 at 8:52 PM wow! love it, Shadow, that you love my dedication piece!! Thanks a lot. my heart is in jubilation. :)

Jan Allison August 11, 2014 at 7:27 AM Fabulous dedication to all mothers - i can fully relate to this wonderful poem:-) Hugs Jan xx Hija De La Luna August 11, 2014 at 7:38 AM i remembered my mother today and realized i am missing her a lot. so, i penned this for her and for all the mothers out there, too :) thanks, Jan! hugs back :))