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Oh Vulnerable Woman

What a beauty you are! In this very life, my life! Oh vulnerable woman! In your fertile womb, Precious little life, What a beauty you are! Lovely soul takes life bids, Without hesitation, Oh vulnerable woman! Without your weakness, You would not offer love, What a beauty you are! Selfless is your existence; Yielding self to a small one, Oh vulnerable woman! Your delicate body gifted life, And life gives peace as price, What a beauty you are! Oh vulnerable woman! 8/11/14 ** This is dedicated to my wonderful mother who took the risk of giving us all her children - LIFE. My salute to all mothers whose vulnerability is a true beauty!!

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Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/17/2014 8:56:00 PM

Nice dedication to your Mom and to all mothers. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/18/2014 12:56:00 AM

thanks, joyce! to all the mothers out there i am just overwhelmed by the love they have and will even risk their lives. love and light!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/16/2014 1:14:00 AM

Nice dedication to your mother with this emotional write, Luna. My daughter's name is Luna. She is in Windsor Canada. I have written a poem on Luna with the same title.

Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/16/2014 9:14:00 PM

Thank you, Dr. Ram. Nice to know you have a daughter named Luna. will check that poem :))

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/15/2014 10:54:00 PM

Wonderful write n so is the win Luna! congrats on top win!

Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/16/2014 9:14:00 PM

thank you, Dr. Upma! God bless you!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2014 9:26:00 PM

you are welcome, thanks for the reply

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/15/2014 9:06:00 PM

congratulations, Hija... Linda

Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/15/2014 9:16:00 PM

Thank you, Linda! God bless you :)

Tim Smith

Date: 8/15/2014 2:57:00 PM

Congratulations to you and your Mother...hugs Tim

Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/15/2014 8:53:00 PM

Thanks, Tim :) hugs

Faye Gibson

Date: 8/15/2014 2:12:00 PM

A beautiful win, Luna; congratulations.

Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/15/2014 8:53:00 PM

Thank you, Faye! God bless you!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/15/2014 2:06:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx

Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/15/2014 8:52:00 PM

thanks, Jan! hugs :))

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/15/2014 1:43:00 PM

hi Hija and welcome to soup a stunning write of dedication congrats on 1st place hugs

Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/15/2014 8:52:00 PM

wow! love it, Shadow, that you love my dedication piece!! Thanks a lot. my heart is in jubilation. :)

Jan Allison

Date: 8/11/2014 7:27:00 AM

Fabulous dedication to all mothers - i can fully relate to this wonderful poem:-) Hugs Jan xx

Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/11/2014 7:38:00 AM

i remembered my mother today and realized i am missing her a lot. so, i penned this for her and for all the mothers out there, too :) thanks, Jan! hugs back :))