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Oh, to write a sonnet on my one true light-o'-love, to write a song to make the warbling sing - a melody that to your eyes would bring tears of fond remembrance for your own true well-thought-of. Oh, to flood ravines with bursts of spring! How do I employ the moon and stars in verse and conjure with them messages to measure the merit of the poet's brightest treasure when I know not of love's allure nor passion to coerce? How do I stir light from the obscure? Oh, to etch a portrait of the one upon my pillow with words that fall so sweetly on the ear of him, with gentle soul who cares to hear the moan of restless wind through pine and willow or of me, a billow rising to my dear. Aug. 18, 2020 for Strand Completely New (24) ,Any Form,Any Theme Poetry Contest

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Date: 8/27/2020 4:31:00 PM
I'm a week late in reading this, but I'm in agreement with Greg, this ranks with your best. Very expressive and combines the aspects you excel at: nature, love, longing, and writing about writing. A fav for me.
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Date: 8/20/2020 10:39:00 PM
OK, Andrea ... where have you been hiding this?? This is one of my all-time favorites of yours, and I have many ... I immediately had to re-read this about ten times! Love the phrasing, the metre, the romance and form, love the subject matter and word-use, all framed inside a gorgeous, melancholy, classic ache for love ... one of your best, and I mean that wholeheartedly, (this should be at the top). Love it and fave-ing, of course! :o) <3
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Date: 8/20/2020 9:59:00 PM
Hello Andrea ... I only wish I could write romantic verse as you do Andrea. This one reads so beautifully - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 8/19/2020 8:48:00 PM
You know, this is truly sweet rhyme, Andrea, expressing genuine, heartfelt yearning. I really like it a lot; it speaks to me... And congrats on your placement in Brian's contest too. (N/A for me). Kudos, Gershon
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Date: 8/20/2020 9:07:00 AM
better to get N/A from him than HM. At least you might be able to use your poem again in someone's N/A contest!! Thanks, Gershon.
Date: 8/19/2020 2:22:00 AM
Beautiful write Andrea full of romantic longings. Tom
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Date: 8/19/2020 2:06:00 AM
Being i am, a lover of English classic poetry, Andrea, (Keats, etc) this upon reading, had me thinking of them, for the obvious reasons.
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Date: 8/19/2020 12:49:00 AM
Lovingly penned, Andrea:)
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Date: 8/18/2020 11:31:00 PM
Beautifully penned rhyme Andrea..Oh, to flood ravines with bursts of spring!.. You conveyed a mesmerizing feel of love.. Good luck..
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Date: 8/18/2020 7:47:00 PM
Wonderful piece Andrea. Underlying tones of passion. Enjoyed reading...
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