Constance La France Poet Kimo

''Oh Time, Old and Tattered''

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clicking slowly with the passage of life,
my childhood devoured by time;

a clock that never rests . . . 



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February 19, 2015

Poetry/Kimo/''oh time, old and tattered''
Copyright Protected, ID 02-641-298-19
All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France

For the Standard contest, In The Praise Of Kimo, Visual 2
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Third Place

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Debra Squyres March 19, 2015 at 10:29 AM I like this interpretive kimo... well matched with the photo. Well done and congrats on your win!!

Casarah Nance March 13, 2015 at 4:21 PM Interesting poem to go with the picture. Nicely done on your win!

Jan Allison March 13, 2015 at 7:48 AM Dropping back with my congratulations :-) Hugs Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 20, 2015 at 8:59 AM THE WINNER for me "childhood devoured by time" just a couple of minutes back I was thinking about the invincibility of time. Wonderful poem BMW. God bless...Rajat

Andrea Dietrich February 19, 2015 at 9:26 PM BTW, you say you can't do pictures? It's really easy, Constance. Go to the box at the bottom of your submission page. Click on the icon that is for "paste" and then use the CTRL and V keys together to paste your picture (after you have clicked on it over at the image you want to use and have already copied it.) Constance La France February 21, 2015 at 7:58 PM Thanks Andrea, it worked!!!!

Andrea Dietrich February 19, 2015 at 9:24 PM this visual was my other choice if I could not come up with something for the third one. I felt the same way as you when I saw that first visual. NICELY done!!! I think you've WON

Jan Allison February 19, 2015 at 1:13 PM Very nicely penned Broken Wings - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Poesy Relish February 19, 2015 at 12:52 PM Nice pen dear.. best wishes.. nad

Janet Eaton February 19, 2015 at 9:22 AM Love this, Good luck in the contest. Janet