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''Oh Time, Old and Tattered''

. . . clicking slowly with the passage of life, my childhood devoured by time; a clock that never rests . . . _________________________ February 19, 2015 Poetry/Kimo/''oh time, old and tattered'' Copyright Protected, ID 02-641-298-19 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France For the Standard contest, In The Praise Of Kimo, Visual 2 sponsor Nette Onclaud Third Place

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Debra Squyres

Date: 3/19/2015 10:29:00 AM

I like this interpretive kimo... well matched with the photo. Well done and congrats on your win!!

Casarah Nance

Date: 3/13/2015 4:21:00 PM

Interesting poem to go with the picture. Nicely done on your win!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/13/2015 7:48:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations :-) Hugs Jan xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/20/2015 8:59:00 AM

THE WINNER for me "childhood devoured by time" just a couple of minutes back I was thinking about the invincibility of time. Wonderful poem BMW. God bless...Rajat

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2015 9:26:00 PM

BTW, you say you can't do pictures? It's really easy, Constance. Go to the box at the bottom of your submission page. Click on the icon that is for "paste" and then use the CTRL and V keys together to paste your picture (after you have clicked on it over at the image you want to use and have already copied it.)

Constance La France
Date: 2/21/2015 7:58:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, it worked!!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2015 9:24:00 PM

this visual was my other choice if I could not come up with something for the third one. I felt the same way as you when I saw that first visual. NICELY done!!! I think you've WON

Jan Allison

Date: 2/19/2015 1:13:00 PM

Very nicely penned Broken Wings - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Poesy Relish

Date: 2/19/2015 12:52:00 PM

Nice pen dear.. best wishes.. nad

Janet Eaton

Date: 2/19/2015 9:22:00 AM

Love this, Good luck in the contest. Janet