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Oh, Shell Shock!

Inside out sun hole Navigates concave pea bowl Full degree skin jump

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/2/2009 9:15:00 AM
i like your usage of words in this ^^ awesome
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Date: 8/9/2009 5:23:00 PM
Interesting images forward your thoughts in a creative way. The title and last line work well together. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 8/1/2009 4:07:00 PM
Interesting writing. Sara//My poem entitled Poetry In State Of Development...Is being developed by me unfinished work. I am not exactly sure which way to go with it.
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Date: 7/31/2009 1:54:00 PM
hmmmm ..trying to discribe the indiscribable. Light & Love
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Date: 7/19/2009 7:15:00 AM
great imagery-charma
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Date: 7/18/2009 10:35:00 PM
leaps and imagination! nice haiku! Cesar! jim
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