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Oh, Shell Shock!

Inside out sun hole
Navigates concave pea bowl
Full degree skin jump

confusionhaiku

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Jay Loveless

November 2, 2009 at 9:15 AM

i like your usage of words in this ^^ awesome

August 9, 2009 at 5:23 PM

Interesting images forward your thoughts in a creative way. The title and last line work well together. Keep on writing! Karen

Sara Kendrick

August 1, 2009 at 4:07 PM

Interesting writing. Sara//My poem entitled Poetry In State Of Development...Is being developed by me unfinished work. I am not exactly sure which way to go with it.