Oh Sarah

The morning dew glistens upon the open field Another new day is here Will I find my true love today Is he really out there Will I find my true love today Will he ever appear Will I find my true love today That is the least of my fears

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Niall Fulham

Date: 5/19/2017 12:01:00 PM

Hi Tim , lovely first poem I enjoyed reading ::)))

Darren White

Date: 12/14/2016 3:01:00 AM

I decided to read your very first poem here. I love it. I think I read it with different eyes now than I would have when you first published it :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/4/2016 7:46:00 PM

Great write, now I think having read so many of your poems, I can appreciate this one more. :)

Lynn Marie

Date: 8/26/2016 3:40:00 PM

..hi tim..popping in where it all began for you before reading your new poem. It's nice to get a feel of your 'start' here at PS:-)(a first for me is reading all the comments 'prior' to writing my own...I am strict with myself that way..I focus on the poem, my comments are based solely on the emotions I feel from your words) I read comments after..this is how I learn..I can see how 'off base' I was..lol This is so pretty..your heart glows especially the last line :-) Thank you :-) lynn

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/3/2015 1:40:00 AM

The morning dew will always glisten on the open fields for people with a kind heart like yours.A lovely poem about Sarah..Sweet : )! Guess I still didn't tell you-Welcome to poetrysoup site,its the place were spices blend!!Charma

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/9/2015 12:15:00 PM

Dear Tim So I wanted to go back to your beginning to read your very first posting, icely done two I might say, it reminds me of when i Was a young girl and some of the feelings I had way back then the doubts of my future, and now the regrets of my past, it is pretty mind pondering stuff, very inspirational, cheri

Cynthia Jones

Date: 1/6/2015 5:36:00 PM

What a beautifully penned poem Tim. Well done. Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

Cynthia Jones
Date: 1/6/2015 9:28:00 PM

You are most welcome Tim. :O) I'll be back to read more. *S* Cynthia

Tim Smith
Date: 1/6/2015 5:38:00 PM

Thanks Cynthia...I have come a long way since I first penned this....Tim

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/11/2014 10:05:00 AM

You have become an important part of the soup, I for one am glad you are here. I enjoyed rereading your first offering.

Tim Smith
Date: 8/11/2014 10:09:00 AM

I wrote this for one of my first dates after my split from my now ex....thanks for stopping back here..... Tim

Sarah Muldoon

Date: 2/17/2014 10:09:00 PM

I was immediately attracted to this poem because my name is Sarah and while reading it I was thinking to myself how That exact thought Is my first one everyday! ......thanks for sharing :)

Tim Smith
Date: 2/17/2014 10:11:00 PM

When I see your name I think of this poem..lol...I am glad you liked it ...Tim

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/31/2014 12:29:00 AM

Just as both Diana Ross and Phil Collins said, "You can't hurry love". I hope your Sarah finds her true love.

Tim Smith
Date: 1/31/2014 6:39:00 AM

Yes indeed

Robert Rogers

Date: 1/29/2014 10:28:00 AM

Tim Smith, "'very brave"...Nice work! Robert

Tim Smith
Date: 1/29/2014 10:10:00 PM

Thank You Robert....Tim

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 1/24/2014 5:45:00 PM

Great poem there! Not often that I like a poem this much. Great to meet you, Tim! As regarding your question about Emma, she is not my daughter, but I would not mind if she was. She is actually a young friend of mine.

Tim Smith
Date: 1/24/2014 5:48:00 PM

thank you Isaiah for your kind word..I will have to look at more of you work....Tim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2014 11:27:00 AM

this is an interesting first post, Tim. Do you have many poems or are you just starting out? Welcome to Soup. It will be interesting to learn more about you!

Tim Smith
Date: 1/19/2014 11:33:00 AM

I have not written poems in a really long time. I used to write them for my first love. I feel blessed with all the love and support here on the soup..I am so happy that I have started writing again. Tim

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/19/2014 10:48:00 AM

A very well written first piece. Welcome to the soup Tim. I hope you enjoy your time here. I have learned a lot and gotten to know some amazing people. Keep writing! Drop by and visit any time. Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem this morning.

Tim Smith
Date: 1/19/2014 10:56:00 AM

You are very welcome and thank you for all the kind words. I look forward to reading more of your work. Tim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2014 8:27:00 AM

Tim, , well expressed.... , I like your first poetic piece on the site, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Tim Smith
Date: 1/14/2014 5:53:00 PM

Thank you Linda. it is nice to know that poetry is still appreciated by many. I will talk to you soon. Tim

Skat A

Date: 1/14/2014 5:14:00 AM

very deep Tim, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Skat

Tim Smith
Date: 1/14/2014 5:52:00 PM

Thank you and hello. I used to write poetry many moons ago but just for the close people in my life. As I get a little older and do I dare say wiser, I think I want to share with the world. I would love to have a poetry friend. Tim I will have to take a look at some of your work as well.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/14/2014 4:42:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Tim- I choose your first sweet and lovely poem and hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith
Date: 1/14/2014 5:46:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words Anne. It is nice to have somewhere to express yourself. Tim