Oh Sarah

I decided to read your very first poem here. I love it. I think I read it with different eyes now than I would have when you first published it :)

Great write, now I think having read so many of your poems, I can appreciate this one more. :)

..hi tim..popping in where it all began for you before reading your new poem. It's nice to get a feel of your 'start' here at PS:-)(a first for me is reading all the comments 'prior' to writing my own...I am strict with myself that way..I focus on the poem, my comments are based solely on the emotions I feel from your words) I read comments after..this is how I learn..I can see how 'off base' I was..lol This is so pretty..your heart glows especially the last line :-) Thank you :-) lynn

The morning dew will always glisten on the open fields for people with a kind heart like yours.A lovely poem about Sarah..Sweet : )! Guess I still didn't tell you-Welcome to poetrysoup site,its the place were spices blend!!Charma

Dear Tim So I wanted to go back to your beginning to read your very first posting, icely done two I might say, it reminds me of when i Was a young girl and some of the feelings I had way back then the doubts of my future, and now the regrets of my past, it is pretty mind pondering stuff, very inspirational, cheri

What a beautifully penned poem Tim. Well done. Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

You have become an important part of the soup, I for one am glad you are here. I enjoyed rereading your first offering.

I was immediately attracted to this poem because my name is Sarah and while reading it I was thinking to myself how That exact thought Is my first one everyday! ......thanks for sharing :)

Just as both Diana Ross and Phil Collins said, "You can't hurry love". I hope your Sarah finds her true love.

Tim Smith, "'very brave"...Nice work! Robert

Great poem there! Not often that I like a poem this much. Great to meet you, Tim! As regarding your question about Emma, she is not my daughter, but I would not mind if she was. She is actually a young friend of mine.

this is an interesting first post, Tim. Do you have many poems or are you just starting out? Welcome to Soup. It will be interesting to learn more about you!

A very well written first piece. Welcome to the soup Tim. I hope you enjoy your time here. I have learned a lot and gotten to know some amazing people. Keep writing! Drop by and visit any time. Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem this morning.

Tim, , well expressed.... , I like your first poetic piece on the site, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

very deep Tim,  , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Skat

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Tim- I choose your first sweet and lovely poem and hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)