Oh, People Dont You Know

In the darkness of silence, words are formed but no one speaks
In my dream, I am told, of the dangers of silence, accepted 
I can’t shake the feeling of trepidation
That no one cares and I walk alone with this world of silence
Of the sounds of truths not spoken

Of no one listening 
They ignore what their hearts are saying
But turn away from prophets’ fate to talk of global warming 
Do not admit your moral faults, keeping silence is easy
Then the truth of following neon gods

In dark silence and silent nods, with
people busy on their phones, dare not disturb their slumber
Thousands cover mouths, thousands cover ears
The sound of silence is winning 
and the devil is grinning, in a malignant growth

Of silence growing
Though some are starting to speak its’s name
The truth is whispers in darkness and unheard words
Oh, people don’t you know, you must speak or it will grow
Only if you stand up is silence to die


Written:  7-26-2019
Sound of silence Poetry Contest
Sponsor:  John Hamilton
Written about the Simon and Garfunkel song "The Sound of Silence"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lamoureux Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 9:03 AM
There is no doubt you are expressing the sentiments of the song. Best of luck in the contest. Hugs Rick.
Godwin Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 2:16 PM
Your words would have brought that song to mind even if I didn't know about the contest. The feel of their emotive vocals is even captured in your imagery; I think you nailed that with a not so silent hammer! Good, good, good job and then some. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Mcgee Avatar
July 29, 2019 at 1:00 AM
Enchanted, I am...thank you...
Popoola  Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 7:21 AM
An ear shattering silence indeed
Adams Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 8:22 PM
people don't care to listen to the whispers or the word of God....yep the devil is grinning from ear to ear....creative take on the song :) hugs
Onclaud Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 8:21 PM
a compelling write beautifully rendered, jeanne... huggs
Dietrich Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 7:46 PM
yes, you are capturing that song's essence with many of your fine lines, Jeanne. Well done!
Foster Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 5:27 PM
Oh my... I get this from the beginning to the end. Excellent. "truth is whispers in darkness". That is sometimes all there is... whispers... then total silence... Hugs. Ann
Krutsinger Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 4:31 AM
"neon gods" is so true! Loved that line. This poem is a winner. I think it will be standing in the winner's circle, my friend!
Blown Avatar
July 26, 2019 at 7:46 PM
ah!?...therei-in lies the rub..."people don't you know Such Overwhelming Silence!!!!?
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