Oh My Sun
Tender streams the night
flames a flicker filled delight
fresh a yellow painted rose
held in perfect sweet repose
Oh my sun, my precious sun
your warmth breathes long
hidden 'mongst a subtle guise
filling out a summer's day
Lunar leaps an oval face
stealing rays of saving grace
languid pains a vision lost
heart lie still a tempest tossed
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