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Oh My Mother

Oh my mother! you are soft as a feather, Caring as a bird and bright as the sun, And for me, so much fun! Oh my mother! you are the head of the family, You give us food and treat us good. You are never so strict, just you scold us a bit! Oh my mother! you are my first teacher, You helped me to talk and helped me to walk. Oh my mother! these are the things I liked about you. I love you!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/31/2014 1:06:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to a wonderful mother. Well done, Megha! Please continue to write more of these gems! Pandita
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Date: 7/7/2014 7:45:00 PM
Megha,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/7/2014 1:00:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Megha. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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Date: 7/3/2014 11:16:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Megha :) - I choose your first sweet and lovely written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. -// Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/3/2014 11:09:00 AM
Megha,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/3/2014 11:08:00 AM
Thank you for sharing :)
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