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Oh My Love, Your Love Kills Me Now

Oh my love, your love kills me now......

At the end of the day, I am left alone in my room
And you are not here to share my love with me
Distance keeps us away and my heart become empty
I wipe my tears day by day while I think of you

Chorus......
Oh my love, your love kills me now
My heart grieves every day and night
Oh, how so much I need you by my side to have your love with me
Distance may keep us apart but my love always 
hold you near my heart always

You are the only love for me and our love is so true
I love you in many ways because your love is perfect and so 
beautiful in every way

You came into my life and made me complete
I could feel your love from the distance
with touch of your soul in me everywhere 

Chorus......
Oh my love, your love kills me now
My heart grieves every day and night
Oh, how so much I need you by my side to have your love with me
Distance may keep us apart but my love always 
hold you near my heart always

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
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Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 5/2/2018 11:12:00 AM Hello Ravi, this is a very sad love poem. Two people in love yet live far apart. Have a nice day my friend. Login to Reply

Debbie Duncan Date: 4/19/2018 4:49:00 PM Nice write. Thank you for coming to read my Injured Bird, I heard it on commercial so I wrote a poem :) Login to Reply

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 4/16/2018 8:30:00 AM WOW! Awesome lyrics - so beautifully romantic yet tugs at the heart because of the distance between the lover and his beloved! Thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece! Have a great week ahead. Hugs and love. Pandita Login to Reply

Charlie Smith Date: 3/28/2018 11:48:00 AM Nicely done Ravi, love can be double edged... Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/3/2018 1:41:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend. Very much appreciated. - Ravi

Paul Callus Date: 3/27/2018 11:29:00 AM A lovely poem enhanced by heartfelt love and a deep feeling of longing, Ravi. Regards // paul Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/3/2018 1:42:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend. Very much appreciated. - Ravi

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/26/2018 8:37:00 PM a lyrical heartfelt gem, Ravi. Sad one! Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/3/2018 1:42:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend. Very much appreciated. - Ravi Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/3/2018 1:41:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend. Very much appreciated. Hugs and love - Ravi xxxxx

Cheryl Hoffman Date: 3/26/2018 8:32:00 PM A well expressed poignant heartfelt write Ravi!~Che :) Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/3/2018 1:42:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend. Very much appreciated. - Ravi

Eve Roper Date: 3/26/2018 4:15:00 PM Lovely write, Ravi, distant love with such loneliness and also painful.. Eve Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/3/2018 1:42:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend. Very much appreciated. - Ravi

Silent One Date: 3/26/2018 2:09:00 PM So sad my friend, there is no pain such a loss... Especially one we love so much.. Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/3/2018 1:42:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend. Very much appreciated. - Ravi

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/26/2018 12:03:00 PM - A song that's beautiful, Ravi - A particularly beautiful last line ... it tells me that love is great :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/3/2018 1:41:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend. Very much appreciated. Hugs and love - Ravi xxxxx

Arturo Michael Date: 3/26/2018 10:07:00 AM You wrote a song... A lovely one too...All the best Ravi Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/3/2018 1:42:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend. Very much appreciated. - Ravi

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/26/2018 7:23:00 AM How sweet this is! Your words adorn your special love..very lyrical and heartfelt rendering..well done, Ravi. Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/3/2018 1:43:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend. Very much appreciated. - Ravi

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/26/2018 5:58:00 AM Enjoyed reading your love lost poem. It is a pain that hurts to the core. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/3/2018 1:43:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend. Very much appreciated. - Ravi

Maria Williams Date: 3/26/2018 4:42:00 AM Oh this is just lovely Ravi, very fitting for a song.....Maria Login to Reply Ravi Sathasivam Date: 4/3/2018 1:43:00 AM Thank you very much for your comment on my poem dear friend. Very much appreciated. - Ravi