Oh My Dear Son, If Only You Knew

Just turned seventeen when I took the shilling
Got a smart uniform, and some shiny boots too
Then off to camp to learn about killing,
Oh my dear son, if only you knew.

Next stop was France, a young lad abroad
How welcoming and warm we found the French,
But ideas of adventure are put to the sword
When you're standing knee deep in mud in a trench.

The shelling was awful, it scared me to death
A voice shouted duck! there's one coming through
Many of my mates then took their last breath
Oh my dear son, if only you knew.

I'm yer old dad, but once I was young too
But my youth was tainted for I lived with killing,
And I saw such horrors I'd dare not tell you,
You did what they said, once you took the shilling.

Even today I hear wounded men screaming
I see the face of the man my bayonet ran through,
I charge the barbed wire every night as I'm dreaming,
Oh my dear son... if only you knew.









Entry for
If only you knew Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Silent One.
24/8/2019. Placed 2nd.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 9/9/2019 10:05:00 AM
A big big congratulations to you edar friend. This is lovely. So so beautiful.
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Date: 9/9/2019 10:38:00 AM
Thank you Funom. :)
Date: 8/31/2019 3:16:00 PM
- Congratulations Gary, on your winning poem, a really special poem ... so many who do not understand - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/31/2019 3:31:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. :)
Date: 8/29/2019 3:57:00 PM
Many a soldier will feel this way, the horrors of war stay with us.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 8/29/2019 3:58:00 PM
Thank you Silent One. :)
Date: 8/25/2019 9:47:00 AM
Powerful! If only they knew. But, unfortunately, to this day, after thousands of years of history, yet experience is the only teacher. God help us all! Great writing!
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/25/2019 9:58:00 AM
Thank you Joe. :)
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