Beryl Edmonds Poet Rhyme

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Oh My Charming Valentine

Oh My Charming Valentine
All moonbeams that there's ever been 
Silver stars in sky that sheen
Nothing compares, nothing it seems 
To those eyes of yours that gleam.

Sounds of a thousand violins
Melodious birds on wings
Nothing compares, as our romance
Stirs my heart to sing and dance.

Pretty emperor butterfly
Colours pleasing to the eye
Nothing compares, for you my love
Raise my soul to soar above.

Rows of appealing daffodils
Swaying upon windy hills
Nothing compares, since only you
Can thrill me the way you do.

You're too resplendent to be true
There’s no one could replace you 
Be mine, be mine till close of time
Oh my charming Valentine.

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14th February 2021
Valentine Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Richard Lamoureux

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Sam Kauffman March 2, 2021 at 10:49 AM Utterly charming Belle with your deep love expressed so creatively! Congratulations on your win! Beryl Edmonds March 2, 2021 at 11:30 AM Thank you very much Sam, those words mean a lot ~ Belle

Alexis Y. March 1, 2021 at 10:40 PM Hi Belle, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your win. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis Beryl Edmonds March 2, 2021 at 11:29 AM Thank you Alexis, everything wonderful is wished for you :-) Belle

Richard Lamoureux March 1, 2021 at 7:30 AM Thanks for adding to the Valentine mood. Congrats on your win. Beryl Edmonds March 1, 2021 at 7:43 AM Thank you very much Richard, I’m delighted with the placement ~ Belle

Bj Legros Kelley February 22, 2021 at 12:23 PM So pretty!! <3 Beryl Edmonds February 23, 2021 at 7:22 AM Thank you BJ... Belle

Rama Balasubramanian February 17, 2021 at 10:39 PM Simply beautiful, enchanting, how well you have compared your valentine with nature bringing out the beauty of both. You should participate in in the latest parallel poetry contest. It has same requirement. Have a wonderful day! Take care, Rama Beryl Edmonds February 17, 2021 at 11:06 PM Thank you so much Rama, will take a look at the contest. Have a lovely day yourself and take care... Belle

Andrea Dietrich February 16, 2021 at 1:58 PM sweet as can be, and utterly charming. Beryl Edmonds February 17, 2021 at 11:04 PM Thank you Andrea, truly grateful ~ Belle

Akkina Downing February 15, 2021 at 9:02 PM Beautiful and charming... I love it :) Beryl Edmonds February 16, 2021 at 2:19 AM Oh so nice of you Akkina, thank you very much ~ Belle

Jennifer Proxenos February 15, 2021 at 11:02 AM It is a charming poem, and your Prince charming Valentine and you will live and love for ever and ever. Beautiful poem my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Beryl Edmonds February 15, 2021 at 11:40 AM Jennifer your comments are so kind and charming too, thank you very much ~ Belle

Gershon Wolf February 14, 2021 at 4:58 PM Is 'he' digital or bionic or something?! lol. Methinks the stars that shine well up from your heart into your eyes. This is one lucky dude, all's I gotta say! HVD, Belle! :) gw Beryl Edmonds February 14, 2021 at 6:30 PM Ha, I would say that too Gershon. I hope you had a wonderful Valentine’s Day ~ Belle

Alexis Y. February 14, 2021 at 2:55 PM Hi Belle, You've penned such a lovely Valentine's Day write. I enjoyed the poem in its entirety, however the second stanza was just breathtaking.Excellent job. I'm adding this to my fav collection:-) Alexis Beryl Edmonds February 14, 2021 at 3:06 PM Hi Alexis, thank you so much, your lovely words mean a lot ~ Belle :-)

Victor Buhagiar February 14, 2021 at 10:05 AM Hopefully Valentine days last a long time. ~~ Beryl Edmonds February 14, 2021 at 12:33 PM I’m sure they will, everyone loves love and Valentine’s Day is a day to celebrate ~~ Belle