Oh Mother

Mother I love you,come close allow me to hug you
from your womb I came you embraced me as you 
whispered my name,I love you,you were the first 
woman to say my name with love while thanking 
the lord above for giving you a baby and shedding
his love from above,my love,your motherly with heavenly 
touch oh how I love you so much,I appreciate your 
knowledge after doing wrong I hope you will live long to 
guide me along mom I promise I will help you stand strong
when you get old,I will fold your sheets and help you eat
and rub your feet as you sit on your rocking seat
I will even read you the bible before you sleep, Oh mother
oh beautiful mother,at this present time you are young and
I am to thank you for all the things that you do thank you 
happy mothers day ok.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
May 17, 2012 at 2:31 PM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Any Dedication" contest Elliott. Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 2:52 PM
Congrats on your win, Elliott. Beautiful piece, my friend. Nice going. Thanks for your recent comments. Best to you and yours. Ralph
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 7:51 PM
Thank you so much!!!
Williams Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 1:24 AM
Elliott congrats on your win..David
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 7:51 PM
Thank you so much!!!
A   Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 12:10 AM
ELLIOTT, congratulations with your wonderful entry. Tank you for supporting my contest. Every entry was lovely in it's own way and deep for the occasion. Good night, ;-) PD
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 7:51 PM
Thank you so much!!!
Murphy Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 5:51 PM
Priceless!!
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 7:52 PM
Thank you so much!!!
Burch Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 11:59 PM
Oh, Elliott, *tear* what a prescious write this is!!!Such a tender heart...and loving son...your mother is blessed! Thank you for sharing ... this wonderful tribute to your mother...God Bless You, dear one...big hugs, love ya , deb
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 7:52 PM
Thank you so much!!!
Esquire Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 9:41 PM
Dear Elliott, A Masterpiece, I read this and see YOUR LOVE for YOUR Mother and Her LOVE for YOU. I bet You brought a Tear of Joy to YOUR Mother's eye. With LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER,YOUR Eternal Liege... Harry Soup Mail Call in a few minutes I have to write Vie
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 7:52 PM
Thank you so much!!!
K Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 8:46 PM
A lovely heartfelt dedication! Beautiful
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 7:50 PM
Thank you so much!!!
Neels Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 1:08 PM
This is a stunning dedication to your mom Elliott.. I hope you share this with her ;) Wilma
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 7:50 PM
Thank you so much!!!
Vresk Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 11:38 AM
Dear Elliott,,God bless you ,you are perfect son any mother could wish for,your words have brought tears to my eyes,tears of you,that world has a such a good man as you are,thank you ,Ivy
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 7:49 PM
Thank you so much!!! I'm glad you have been touched by my sincere poem...
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 10:11 AM
this is so wonderful. I would LOVE to get a poem like this from my son. But this is not something he would ever write or even think about me (and I know I must be older than your young mother). Your mother is such a lucky woman .
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 7:47 PM
Thanks a bunch....
Harrell Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 9:41 AM
"Ohhh, I love it, Elliott. Such a wonderful poem. Hope your mother will live long and all her days are happy days. Happy Mother's Day. Love, Toquyen"
The Drunken Poet Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 7:46 PM
Thanks a bunch....
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