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my red-robed friend grand on your perch how regal yours - now dressed for church so formal how you meet the springtide dawn thus singing bright 'til morning's veil is gone oh bright - folks praise your gowns of red but I'm charmed with your song instead sweet a Capellas start and end each day that must be how a Cardinal learns to pray bleak winters, late, I’ve strained to hear you tease those tympans, deep my ears so sad the song, it haunts me thru-and-thru your mate now gone, that never … answers you. ~ 3rd Place ~ in the "Brian's Select 2, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 3rd Place ~ in the "Songbirds" Poetry Contest, Tania Kitchin, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 6/3/2020 10:27:00 PM
Lonely lines - beautiful images of this lovely songbird. Congratulations on your winning placement. So well done! Blessings dear friend.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/3/2020 10:56:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Sam, your opinion means a great deal - I'm pleased you enjoyed this one, my friend - blessings to you! :o)
Date: 6/3/2020 11:13:00 AM
So glad I read this today, my friend. In your tale of the sad little bird with the beautiful song, you delicately dropped in so many subtle references to the Cardinal as a church figure: lordly, veil, church, praise, and the great line "That must be how a Cardinal learns to pray". I also enjoyed " You tease the tympans of my ear". A fave for me, should have placed higher in today's contest, I feel. ~ John
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 6/3/2020 10:55:00 PM
Oh, thank you so much, John, that means a lot - I worked hard on this one to weave that divine ambiguity throughout, but so few people ever comment on such things, so it means a great deal that you DO and find it a worthwhile element. Blessings, My Poet Brother! :o)
Date: 3/11/2019 5:54:00 PM
Nice on, Gregory: Sad too.....sometimes we need sad poems. Hugs, SuZ
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/12/2019 3:33:00 AM
I agree - a balance. Thank you so much, my friend - blessings! :-) <3
Date: 2/25/2019 10:25:00 PM
Lovely, Gregory. Congrats on your well deserved podium finish.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 3/2/2019 6:40:00 PM
Thank you very much, Line! :-) <3
Date: 2/23/2019 11:50:00 AM
Work is me! I felt so sad that the mate would never hear that beautiful melodious call! You my friend paint a beautiful portrait with a sad ending. Congratulations on your
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/23/2019 5:37:00 PM
Many kind thanks to you, Sherilyn, I'm so pleased that you enjoyed my poem - such a sweet comment! Blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 2/22/2019 3:42:00 PM
Back with congratulations! :) xomo! <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/23/2019 5:36:00 PM
Thanks so much, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 2/21/2019 2:59:00 AM
Wow! I can hear the birds thru your poem... Congrats! God bless you.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/23/2019 5:36:00 PM
Oh, that's such a sweet comment, Beata - thanks so very much, friend! :-) <3
Date: 2/20/2019 9:31:00 PM
Congrats Greg on another nice win!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/23/2019 5:35:00 PM
Thank you very much, John! :-)
Date: 2/20/2019 4:45:00 PM
Congratulations, Greg!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/23/2019 5:35:00 PM
Thanks so much, Kim! :-) <3
Date: 2/20/2019 4:23:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Greg. Janice
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/23/2019 5:35:00 PM
Many thanks to you, Janice! :-)
Date: 2/20/2019 2:57:00 PM
Greg, I really enjoyed your sweet and melancholy cardinal poem, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/23/2019 5:34:00 PM
I'm happy that you enjoyed it and found it worthy, Tania - blessings and thanks to you! :-) <3
Date: 2/19/2019 9:55:00 AM
Beautiful, and sad. Lovely write my friend. Good luck in the contest, xomo <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/23/2019 5:33:00 PM
Thanks so much, Maureen, that's very kind! Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 2/19/2019 7:50:00 AM
Sweetness and sadness at its best in your lovely verse, my friend!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/23/2019 5:33:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kim, I greatly appreciate it! :-)

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